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.......Speaking my Mind........
Expendable i am.
Blacksheep of my fam.
Everyone distancing themselves from thee.
Contemplating the extinction of thee.
So utterly alone i feel.
Is this life real?
I see it is a real nightmare.
Ask me if i truly care.
Many reminiscent tales of my personal hell.
Many loved ones taken from this world.
All but me.
I be left behind dispersing many tears.
Nothing more do i fear.
No man living or dead do i fear.
No longer can one voice their opinion, unless it's in line with what the democratic liberals believe.
Freedom of speech is now limited.
To be or not to be hated by all of society.
Blacksheep of my fam.
Everyone distancing themselves from thee.
Contemplating the extinction of thee.
So utterly alone i feel.
Is this life real?
I see it is a real nightmare.
Ask me if i truly care.
Many reminiscent tales of my personal hell.
Many loved ones taken from this world.
All but me.
I be left behind dispersing many tears.
Nothing more do i fear.
No man living or dead do i fear.
No longer can one voice their opinion, unless it's in line with what the democratic liberals believe.
Freedom of speech is now limited.
To be or not to be hated by all of society.
Published 27th Jul 2021
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27th Jul 2021 10:06am
Huh...
I'm confused, honestly.
The poem reads like a genuine cry of a soul in pain because of family cruelty...until the 3rd line from the bottom, when it shifts entirely...from the familial, to the political...Did not see that coming. At all.
Is this the reason for the family's hatred, ideological differences? wtf...smh...
Are you conflating the ideological exclusion of being a conservative in a liberal country? Is the family a metaphor of the country? If so, I was taken in 100%...hook, line, and sinker.
Confused.
Well, hang in there, whatever the case is.
I'm confused, honestly.
The poem reads like a genuine cry of a soul in pain because of family cruelty...until the 3rd line from the bottom, when it shifts entirely...from the familial, to the political...Did not see that coming. At all.
Is this the reason for the family's hatred, ideological differences? wtf...smh...
Are you conflating the ideological exclusion of being a conservative in a liberal country? Is the family a metaphor of the country? If so, I was taken in 100%...hook, line, and sinker.
Confused.
Well, hang in there, whatever the case is.
