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The Truth Lies Within
Discover the Truth for yourself
Forget everything you've been told
Believe not a thing that you've heard
Believe me,
I've told you
how to know
what is True
Forget what
you've read,
you already do
Forget everything you've been told
Believe not a thing that you've heard
Believe me,
I've told you
how to know
what is True
Forget what
you've read,
you already do
Published 26th Jul 2021
| Edited 28th Jul 2021
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26th Jul 2021 2:44am
Dear B,
How timely a poem for me. I absolutely agree with your insight and am greatly appreciative for it.
Nicely written and wonderfully positive. H🌷
How timely a poem for me. I absolutely agree with your insight and am greatly appreciative for it.
Nicely written and wonderfully positive. H🌷
26th Jul 2021 6:02am
I'm so happy to read that, Honoria; that this could resonate with you, and that it found you when it did. 😊
And, I'm truly grateful for the amazing feedback.
Thank you so much. 🙏
And, I'm truly grateful for the amazing feedback.
Thank you so much. 🙏
26th Jul 2021 7:29am
Enjoyable theme; too many people looking for answers from others;
Honest Critique: Let's say you want to "free the slaves," which folks in this case are the ones who listen too much to the voices of others, seek enlightenment through others, and not through the self, whatever that is. OK. That's your poetic goal. Here's a question: what mental constraints, perhaps "imaginings" would keep those people from listening to your advice, from heeding your insight?
Honest Critique: Let's say you want to "free the slaves," which folks in this case are the ones who listen too much to the voices of others, seek enlightenment through others, and not through the self, whatever that is. OK. That's your poetic goal. Here's a question: what mental constraints, perhaps "imaginings" would keep those people from listening to your advice, from heeding your insight?
