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Ribbons
In due time, it will be revealed
Till then, let your eyes focus on
Unwrapping the papers
Of the present that lay
Under your sphere.
Till then, let your eyes focus on
Unwrapping the papers
Of the present that lay
Under your sphere.
Published 25th Jul 2021
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25th Jul 2021 8:06pm
Dear L,
I like the message of your poem in appreciating what’s within your circle and in the present moment. It’s so easy to be distracted with outside influences that most often won’t be helpful. Lovely write. H🌷
I like the message of your poem in appreciating what’s within your circle and in the present moment. It’s so easy to be distracted with outside influences that most often won’t be helpful. Lovely write. H🌷
30th Jul 2021 1:23am
25th Jul 2021 9:19pm
All will be unwrapped in perfect timing. I really loved the simplicity of this message.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
Thank you for sharing.
-M
30th Jul 2021 1:25am
