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  Tonight’s the night, collecting my thoughts I get dressed. Formally, as to leave the impression “I know what I’m doing.” White collared shirt, black dress pants, dress socks, dress shoes, and a coat. Driving down the road I’m thinking of all the things I need to do to test her. We’ve been seeing each other for a little while, however, knowing if she’s capable or willing to do what I’ve got in mind, is the entire reasoning for tonight. Pulling up to her apartment, I am pleasantly surprised. She’s wearing a gorgeous, deep sky blue dress, in one inch heals. Her hairs straighten, parted to the right. I get out and walk around to the passenger side and open the door. She walks to the car not knowing what to expect from tonight. As I close the door I am hit in the face by the smell of her perfume, it’s sweet like candy but not overwhelming. I smile and walk to the drivers side. Driving down the road, she’s flipping through music trying to find something to listen to. “What do you want to listen to?” She asks with her face still buried in her phone. “It doesn’t matter, whatever feels right to you.” I say knowing that if it was up to me, we listen to something vulgar. As expected she picks something we both knew. Something that we listened to as kids, I look over at her smiling. She’s dancing in the car the entire drive to the restaurant. When we arrive, it’s not crowded as we expected. “I’m surprised. I thought there would be more people given the ratings from this place.” She says. I climb out of the car and walk to the passenger side. Opening the door I respond “Thankfully, that will mean we shouldn’t have to wait long.” She gets out, I close the door and offer her my arm. Taking my arm, her and I walk to the entrance. I open the door for her and we walk in. “Name please” the hostess asks. “Austin **********” answering her. “Reservation for two, right?” Looking at us. “Yes” I reply. “If you will follow me.” The hostess says leading us to our table. I pull out the chair and my date sits down. I walk to the opposite side and sit down. Looking around the room I see it chose right dressing up like I did. Chandeliers hanging from the ceiling, white clothed tables, classical music playing in the background. Looking at my date she seems a little surprised. “It’s a lot nicer then I thought” I say initiating the conversation. “I never thought I’d see something this beautiful” she says in awe. The first test has begun. We order our food and drinks. “What made you pick a place like this for our date tonight?” She’s looking at me wonderstruck. “You’ve been good this week, you deserved a reward.” Looking into those beautiful sunset eyes. Embarrassed she looks away trying to hide her smile. “So as long as I’m good, I’ll get rewards?” She asks. My guards up “Maybe not rewards this grand but yes. These kinds of rewards are only for occasions.” She realizes just what she said and panics “Oh no I didn’t mean…” lowering my guard I cut her off “I know, you’re not that type of person.” The food is brought to our table and she’s basically drooling. We eat our food and continue talking, about work, the future, and our dreams. After I pay for the meal we stand up and walk out. When we get to the car, I surprise her a bit, grabbing her chin and tilting her head up. She looks at me surprised but not scared, I look into her eyes and smile. I let go and open the passenger side door for her. She’s frozen for a second. “Love? You gonna get in, it’s quite chilly tonight.” I say snapping her back to reality. “Oh, yes, sorry.” She gets in and I close the door. Her eyes follow me as I walk to the driver’s side. I open the door and she looks away. I start the car and drive away. “Not going to play any music this time?” I ask her smiling “what… what was the point of that?” she asks looking directly at me. I look at her out of the corner of my eye, and she’s not mad. “What do you mean?” Keeping my eyes on the road. “You just… were you… I… never mind” she says pouting and looking out the passenger window. I place my hand on her thigh and squeeze a little. “Did you want something to happen?” She whips her head around and looks at me in shock. “I… I don’t know.” Her voice is softer now. We arrive at her apartment, and I open the door for her. She get out and thanks me. I look her in the eyes then down to her lips. I reach my hand up, and notice that she’s looking at my hand. “Scarred?” I ask. “No.” She’s speaking so softly. I lift her face and look into her eyes. “Don’t stop me then” My faces is getting closer and closer to hers. Our lips connect and she closes her eyes. When I come off she opens her mouth as if to speak and I go in. Sliding my tongue into her mouth. A few moments later we walk to her door. I kiss her again but this time, my hands are behind her. Lowering them I grab her ass with one hand. Massaging it as the other lowers as well. She reaches behind her and unlocks the door. We walk in slowly. Backing off, she gasps for air. Her eyes are filled with lust, the second test is complete. She places a hand against my chest and slides it down. As it approaches my lower abdomen, I grab her hand. Confused she asks “what’s wrong?” I look at her and smile shaking my head. I lift her dress a bit and run my fingers up her thigh. I cup her breast with one hand and begin to massage. Kissing her again, I run my other hand up her thigh and to her stomach. The lower my hand goes the more she wraps her arms around me. No longer kissing I reach the goal. She’s gasp, and I begin the third test. Tracing it her gasps turn to whimpers. I take my hand away and lift her dress off completely. Her garments tell me that she expected this. I kneel and lower the first one. She looks so erotic… Lifting her left leg, I go in for a taste. The more I taste it, the more I want to tease her. Her whimpers become muffled moaning. She’s covering her mouth as to not make too much noise. I come up from ground and unbutton my shirt. She falls to her knees and starts working on my pants. She gets to my boxers and I stop her again. A little annoyed she ask “why do you keep stopping me?” “Like I said at the restaurant, if you’re good you’ll get a reward” I remind her. Picking her up from the ground I carry her to the bed. Now on the bed I continue using my fingers, she can’t stop herself this time, her moans are filling the apartment. After she’s reached climax I stand up, and start to walk away. “Please… please give it to me” she says begging. Smiling I look at her and take it out. Her mouth feels warm, she’s trying so hard to make it feel as good as she can. She comes up for air and i kneel between her legs. Before putting it inside, I lean down and kiss her. “Good girl” I whisper in her ear, connecting our bodies. Starting slow, I can see just how much she wants it. She’s disappointed by the slow moments. Looking into her eyes, the beast inside starts to wake up. Her legs are lifted and the pace in increased. She looks so beautiful when she’s crying out. Changing the position I begin the next test. Smack she perks up, smack tightening up, shes moaning even louder.
Written by RagingFlames
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