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Eruption

first a tingle then a spark
we make love in the dark
a rising tide in between
rushes in a powerful stream

in a place where time stands still
I touch you touch me, a thrill
it's such a joy to share with you
sensuality and too

letting go, releasing
feelings felt down deep within
wetness oozing as you sigh
'more and more' inside we cry...

becoming more than egos we
feel each other, you feel me
I feel you as we become
an eruption of just one

raging sexuality
coming close to ecstasy
inside, outside, all around
skin on skin's sweet squelching sound

in a place where time stands still
I touch you touch me, a thrill
a rising tide in between
rushes in a powerful stream
bcpoet
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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