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Complexities

What's wrong with me?
I read poems
But I can't seem
To focus
And analyze
Worth a penny.
Tired. Body tired?
Brain tired?
Saturated?
Ok, some poems
Seem to me
Full of multi-layers
Of different meanings
On many levels.
Over done.
Superfluous complexities.
Written by robert43041 (Viking)
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