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Lines Around Her Eyes

The young are smooth and beautiful.  
Their silky skin is fine.  
But when it comes to deeper love,
give me eyes with lines.  
 
The creases say she’s lived a life  
filled with gain and loss.  
Lines that say she’s loved before,  
and understands the cost.
LostViking
Written by LostViking (Lost Viking)
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Author's Note
Imagining what Renee's eyes might be like if she were alive today.
Her story in Forever Love: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/378689-forever-love/
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