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Take Me Lover
Take Me Lover
Do you want to get down and dirty
Let’s us do the nasty, wild thing
Till one of us passes out from pleasure
You and me, we got it going on
Take me into your arms, worship me
Taste my skin, breathe in my aroma
In return, I want to get it on with you
Foreplay that lasts till the wee hours
Tongues and fingers spreading joy
How about a running commentary
Touch me there, stop, yes just like that
Or silence and just get it on cowpoke
Hard and fast till we lose control
A threesome or maybe even more
Three's no longer a crowd but a party
Cruising for some late-night action
Checking out the nightlife talent
Nothing is taboo between me and you
Toys in the bedroom are welcome
Whisper in my ear, filthy words
That excite me till I almost scream
Fuck me hard, pen me against the wall
Sex in the car park, open spaces rule
Clandestine in the church, a hand job
Let’s do this for forever, lover
Do you want to get down and dirty
Let’s us do the nasty, wild thing
Till one of us passes out from pleasure
You and me, we got it going on
Take me into your arms, worship me
Taste my skin, breathe in my aroma
In return, I want to get it on with you
Foreplay that lasts till the wee hours
Tongues and fingers spreading joy
How about a running commentary
Touch me there, stop, yes just like that
Or silence and just get it on cowpoke
Hard and fast till we lose control
A threesome or maybe even more
Three's no longer a crowd but a party
Cruising for some late-night action
Checking out the nightlife talent
Nothing is taboo between me and you
Toys in the bedroom are welcome
Whisper in my ear, filthy words
That excite me till I almost scream
Fuck me hard, pen me against the wall
Sex in the car park, open spaces rule
Clandestine in the church, a hand job
Let’s do this for forever, lover
Published 22nd Jul 2021
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22nd Jul 2021 1:48am
What a beautiful sensuous mirage my friend.. I reread a little slower to appreciate your poetic .. very smooth
22nd Jul 2021 1:54am
22nd Jul 2021 2:01am
Yes and the pic goes along wiht his great musing... whereas, I can taste the passion.. you are showing off again..
22nd Jul 2021 2:04am
22nd Jul 2021 2:09am
22nd Jul 2021 4:02am
Upon reading, I immediately identified the speaker as female, the you as male.
22nd Jul 2021 3:00pm
is that wrong to write that way at 76 years of age been around as many poets can write as a male of female as i find it is a great gift if one can write both ways
thank you for your read and comment
thank you for your read and comment
Poem that screams 'Take me!' The picture would fit well these lines:
Whisper in my ear, filthy words
That excite me till I almost scream
Fuck me hard, pen me against the wall
Thought up a poetic caption of my own to this picture, rhyming (having noticed stairs and what looks like a window in background:
We don't quite make it up the stairs.
Not worried about passers' stares
if what you do catches their eye
as you doggy my inside thigh.
Whisper in my ear, filthy words
That excite me till I almost scream
Fuck me hard, pen me against the wall
Thought up a poetic caption of my own to this picture, rhyming (having noticed stairs and what looks like a window in background:
We don't quite make it up the stairs.
Not worried about passers' stares
if what you do catches their eye
as you doggy my inside thigh.
22nd Jul 2021 3:05pm
thank you Solomon for your read and comment and the add lines be safe enjoy your day
