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Urges like predators
The urges will never fully go away.
They will always linger like predators stalking their prey.
The feeling of impending doom,
Will always be silent like cobwebs in the corner of the room.
When the house is still and the demons are silent,
I cant seem to find any peace in the quiet.
Published 22nd Jul 2021
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22nd Jul 2021 1:30am
Anonymous
22nd Jul 2021 6:04am
--Demonical Ironical
Enjoyed!
The last 2 lines are great!
Pity there's not more...
Enjoyed!
The last 2 lines are great!
Pity there's not more...
23rd Jul 2021 2:26pm
Dear M,
There was a tremendous energy in this write that was very suspenseful. Kind of like I needed to turn on all the lights and peer around corners. Trying to find a spot I wasn’t annoyed at myself for being in. I know that’s convoluted but I’ve known this feeling and it’s so uncomfortable for me. Another insightful write.
H🌷
There was a tremendous energy in this write that was very suspenseful. Kind of like I needed to turn on all the lights and peer around corners. Trying to find a spot I wasn’t annoyed at myself for being in. I know that’s convoluted but I’ve known this feeling and it’s so uncomfortable for me. Another insightful write.
H🌷
24th Jul 2021 10:54pm
Awww thanks H! I love that some people like you getting wrapped into each word like words coming off of the page!
