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Filled with hope
Filled with hope
Can you find the elusive pot of gold at a Rainbows end, can you find the miracle that will help a sad heart mend
Chasing around hunting, is it worth searching high and low, or do you just admit defeat and let your dreams just go
All the pain you go through, do you continue to stand and fight, or do you just surrender and stop wishing every night
Do you realise you can search no more, the thing you need is gone, you are left in a empty darkness, in a space where Sun once shone
Clouds of despair are now rolling in, you are naked in the rain, at least it will hide the tears, but it can't disguise your pain
How do you just carry on, how do you learn to cope, now you dream in hopeless despair, in a land once filled with hope
Ron
Can you find the elusive pot of gold at a Rainbows end, can you find the miracle that will help a sad heart mend
Chasing around hunting, is it worth searching high and low, or do you just admit defeat and let your dreams just go
All the pain you go through, do you continue to stand and fight, or do you just surrender and stop wishing every night
Do you realise you can search no more, the thing you need is gone, you are left in a empty darkness, in a space where Sun once shone
Clouds of despair are now rolling in, you are naked in the rain, at least it will hide the tears, but it can't disguise your pain
How do you just carry on, how do you learn to cope, now you dream in hopeless despair, in a land once filled with hope
Ron
Published 21st Jul 2021
Author's Note
Never give up hope
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Anonymous
21st Jul 2021 6:48pm
That's right, my lovely friend.... Never surrender!! Your bravery in taking it day by day, eventually leads to improvement of weeks, months then potentially an ongoing or continuing happiness/ contentment....
You're inspirational....
Thanks for sharing
🌹 - B
You're inspirational....
Thanks for sharing
🌹 - B
21st Jul 2021 6:58pm
Awesome review, I'm glad you liked it. We can only hope true love appears but very unlikely lol
Thanks for your review as always gorgeous
Love and light
Ron x
Thanks for your review as always gorgeous
Love and light
Ron x
21st Jul 2021 10:01pm
Yes it’s worth searching high and low, it has to be. Soulful message ❤️🩹
21st Jul 2021 10:49pm
