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In this city of feelings, we have all become writers with no one left to read.
I have memorized word by word each story I wrote.
I read it to myself in times when I can’t feel.
I have memorized word by word each story I wrote.
I read it to myself in times when I can’t feel.
Published 20th Jul 2021
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20th Jul 2021 5:45am
I fucking LOVE this...
You have fucking NAILED it...
This is so good, my only regret (& you solicited honest critique) is it doesn't go on...
But yes, we're in a city of feelings.
A great poem you might like, "The Happy Warrior"--the way you end this reminds me of the end of the Happy Warrior...
Wow!
You have fucking NAILED it...
This is so good, my only regret (& you solicited honest critique) is it doesn't go on...
But yes, we're in a city of feelings.
A great poem you might like, "The Happy Warrior"--the way you end this reminds me of the end of the Happy Warrior...
Wow!
20th Jul 2021 12:18pm
So glad to hear you liked it. Your feedback is in fact working as a motivator. I will work on adding a few more lines to “writers”. 😊
My best!
My best!
20th Jul 2021 9:49am
Dear U,
Interesting write of perspective. I love your closing line. I couldn’t help but wonder if most of us use writing to scream into the void emotions we can’t seem to speak out loud? I agree with Mark_Parsons I wish it had gone on yet, stopping where you did gave this write a powerful impact. H🌷
Interesting write of perspective. I love your closing line. I couldn’t help but wonder if most of us use writing to scream into the void emotions we can’t seem to speak out loud? I agree with Mark_Parsons I wish it had gone on yet, stopping where you did gave this write a powerful impact. H🌷
20th Jul 2021 12:20pm
Isn’t it true.. we are all writers. Walking away through a mental library with countless unread stories! Love your feedback! It keeps me going.. 😊
