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Epiphany
Six and a half years of smoke,
I can't remember a damn thing.
What I do remember,
are the days I didn't get a smoke.
- Mihir Devle a.k.a. DD
I can't remember a damn thing.
What I do remember,
are the days I didn't get a smoke.
- Mihir Devle a.k.a. DD
Published 23rd Feb 2012
| Edited 30th Oct 2013
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23rd Feb 2012 11:22pm
Definite truth we see in our absence to always face truth. Good concept, tight, concrete, meaningful, personal.
24th Feb 2012 6:59am
26th Feb 2012 1:55am
4th Mar 2012 10:08pm
i didnt understand this at first but i re-read it like a million times and i finally get it!!! i love it!! kudos man!
Anonymous
5th Mar 2012 10:56am
great write man, am still digging it after many reads
my only critique would be the : instead of the ; which is really only a stupid grammatical thing
my only critique would be the : instead of the ; which is really only a stupid grammatical thing
6th Oct 2012 7:46am
you are a hell of a good poet.
Lulls you in then smacks you in the face. Brilliant
Lulls you in then smacks you in the face. Brilliant
2nd Mar 2013 2:35am
