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The Desired Path
i
want to
wound you
in the
most
delicious ways
slowly
sensually
gradually
relentlessly
wandering
along
the path
on the
edge
meandering
into
the forest
of
dark
desires
exploring
deeper
further
upon
every
sojourn
(C) 2021 Raibeart Bruis
want to
wound you
in the
most
delicious ways
slowly
sensually
gradually
relentlessly
wandering
along
the path
on the
edge
meandering
into
the forest
of
dark
desires
exploring
deeper
further
upon
every
sojourn
(C) 2021 Raibeart Bruis
Published 14th Jul 2021
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14th Jul 2021 4:56am
15th Aug 2021 9:16pm
14th Jul 2021 5:22am
The forest as sexuality.
I like the first tercet--it's pretty ballsy to rhyme "want to / wound you," but it works!
I like the first tercet--it's pretty ballsy to rhyme "want to / wound you," but it works!
14th Jul 2021 5:50pm
Anonymous
14th Jul 2021 6:13am
Your poem traverses that path of Dominant and submissive desire in such a succinctly beautiful and passionate way.....
on the edge, is often where clarity is found.
I enjoyed this immensely, KP
🌹 - B
on the edge, is often where clarity is found.
I enjoyed this immensely, KP
🌹 - B
14th Jul 2021 5:53pm
Yes walking the edge is where the best stuff happens.
Comfort and safety on one side challenge and danger on the other.
Glad you enjoyed.
Thank you, Blue.
❣️🙏🏼
Comfort and safety on one side challenge and danger on the other.
Glad you enjoyed.
Thank you, Blue.
❣️🙏🏼
