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First Time to Her Apartment
"I'd like to kiss someone who's not my mom"
You laughed, smiled, played along
To her room of fascination
Conjuring up imagination
We started writing verses
Our best with erotic curses
You loved changes in direction
Responded with inflection
The verses, two souls blending
We never wrote an ending
Published 14th Jul 2021
Author's Note
By Pent
July 13th, 2021
July 13th, 2021
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14th Jul 2021 5:26am
I like the idea of sex as writing. That's great!
And the word "inflection" is perfect in a poem like this--it has so many layers of meaning.
Nice.!
And the word "inflection" is perfect in a poem like this--it has so many layers of meaning.
Nice.!
14th Jul 2021 10:18am
I hadn't considered sex could be anything from a long romance novel, to a tragic short poem!
Thanks Mark
Thanks Mark
24th Jul 2021 2:43am
Hey Pent…….short…brief……stunning……luv the ending…….somethings are too good for an ending…….enjoyed…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
24th Jul 2021 2:49am
