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The author encourages honest critique.
14th Jul 2021 6:05am
I love the rhythm of this. Really.
SEE-ing SUN-flo-wer FIELDS of pro-VENCE just the ONCE is e-NOUGH he FEELS before LUNCH
Cretic dactyl dactyl dactyl dactyl cretic...
Some pizazz in that lilting music.
I'd like a good title, or a way to connect this to something more substantive for the reader--(if it were mine that is, that's where I'd start: the title, which could fasten it to something).
Again, enjoyed!
SEE-ing SUN-flo-wer FIELDS of pro-VENCE just the ONCE is e-NOUGH he FEELS before LUNCH
Cretic dactyl dactyl dactyl dactyl cretic...
Some pizazz in that lilting music.
I'd like a good title, or a way to connect this to something more substantive for the reader--(if it were mine that is, that's where I'd start: the title, which could fasten it to something).
Again, enjoyed!
14th Jul 2021 11:37pm
