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Tempestade
The seething tempest died down.
The projectiles that had navigated the distance were cleared away by its waves.
The uproar of the consistent breeze has discovered its equilibrium.
Regardless, when he moves toward her once more,
The degree of earnestness rises.
From then again, the tempest wrecks the suppleness.
The projectiles that had navigated the distance were cleared away by its waves.
The uproar of the consistent breeze has discovered its equilibrium.
Regardless, when he moves toward her once more,
The degree of earnestness rises.
From then again, the tempest wrecks the suppleness.
Published 13th Jul 2021
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
13th Jul 2021 7:15am
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13th Jul 2021 7:53am
13th Jul 2021 7:26am
Yes, the tempest of their feelings...makes a mess of things.
Quick question: is there a reason you used the Portuguese word in the title?
The first time I read it, I thought it meant "Tempest-ade," like Kool-aid or Gatorade or Lemonade...like some kind of convenience store drink or whatever.
Then I looked it up and saw it was the Portuguese word for storm.
Thanks for the read!
Quick question: is there a reason you used the Portuguese word in the title?
The first time I read it, I thought it meant "Tempest-ade," like Kool-aid or Gatorade or Lemonade...like some kind of convenience store drink or whatever.
Then I looked it up and saw it was the Portuguese word for storm.
Thanks for the read!
13th Jul 2021 7:53am
Thank you! <3
And oh! Tempestade was one of my stored vocabulary words, and I thought it would work well as a title for this piece. :-D
And oh! Tempestade was one of my stored vocabulary words, and I thought it would work well as a title for this piece. :-D
