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Set Me on the Water
Set me on the water
Where the current turns to gold
Sing me Hallelujah
To the horizons of my soul
Blow just one kiss
That sets upon the breeze
Together we’ll feel forever
Until you’re here with me
We are one in everything
All sounds, smells and sights
Baptized in the waters
That give eternal light
Where the current turns to gold
Sing me Hallelujah
To the horizons of my soul
Blow just one kiss
That sets upon the breeze
Together we’ll feel forever
Until you’re here with me
We are one in everything
All sounds, smells and sights
Baptized in the waters
That give eternal light
Published 13th Jul 2021
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13th Jul 2021 6:14am
That's a great first line...an interesting, unusual way to reference the horizon.
I like the idea of a breeze you'll feel until you're together; it has supernatural connotations.
I like the idea of a breeze you'll feel until you're together; it has supernatural connotations.
14th Jul 2021 5:44am
