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FEELING STUCK
SEX is Very PAINFUL .
CHEATING is HURT FUL
BUT nothing is as painful as staying stuck where you DONT BELONG
IN MY CRAZY FULL HOUSE
Some people are JUST FUCKING STUCK
in their STINKING WAYS
VERY BRAINWASH
into believing
The COVID-19 IS REAL
CORONA VIRUS AND MY FACE MASK
MAKING ME FEEL IRÁN GAS
BILL TO HELL MORE LIKE FAREWELL
MIDDLE FINGER TO BILL GATES
MY LATÍN MIND GOES VERY DEEP
LIKE THE BLACK HOLE
WONDERING
IF I find a better place
IN A BRAND NEW HOME
But the loneliness
will always capture me
TALKING TO DROP DEAD FRED
ON MY QUEEN SIZE BED
CHEATING is HURT FUL
BUT nothing is as painful as staying stuck where you DONT BELONG
IN MY CRAZY FULL HOUSE
Some people are JUST FUCKING STUCK
in their STINKING WAYS
VERY BRAINWASH
into believing
The COVID-19 IS REAL
CORONA VIRUS AND MY FACE MASK
MAKING ME FEEL IRÁN GAS
BILL TO HELL MORE LIKE FAREWELL
MIDDLE FINGER TO BILL GATES
MY LATÍN MIND GOES VERY DEEP
LIKE THE BLACK HOLE
WONDERING
IF I find a better place
IN A BRAND NEW HOME
But the loneliness
will always capture me
TALKING TO DROP DEAD FRED
ON MY QUEEN SIZE BED
Published 10th Jul 2021
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10th Jul 2021 4:56am
If it's time move on then move on before you both get hurt. Keep.on writing.
10th Jul 2021 4:57am
10th Jul 2021 5:26am
I like the rhythm of "Drop Dead Fred on my Queen size bed"--
The cretic--pyrrhic--cretic pattern is a lot of fun, especially when you find unusual combinations.
It's the same rhythm I see in "Better Place / in a Brand New home"
The swining anthemic quality of those sorts of lines are nice. There are hints of the same rhythm in the earlier sections, but they need a bit of editing to make it come off.
The cretic--pyrrhic--cretic pattern is a lot of fun, especially when you find unusual combinations.
It's the same rhythm I see in "Better Place / in a Brand New home"
The swining anthemic quality of those sorts of lines are nice. There are hints of the same rhythm in the earlier sections, but they need a bit of editing to make it come off.
10th Jul 2021 5:38am
I know
I was stuck just writing this poem
Then the virus came in mind
Im like What the fuck
I know it needs some editing
Then I was talking. To myself
LIKE My child hood days
Watching the movie drop dead fred
OVER and over
Believing i had a invisible fake friend
I was stuck just writing this poem
Then the virus came in mind
Im like What the fuck
I know it needs some editing
Then I was talking. To myself
LIKE My child hood days
Watching the movie drop dead fred
OVER and over
Believing i had a invisible fake friend
10th Jul 2021 12:09pm
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