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GANGSTA'S CREED
What’s up motherfucker... you on this site talking like you got some clout
You an imposter wannabe fake ass poet who ran once my Glock’s bullets turned your route
I told you I own the air you breathe
It’s no escaping me...
And you know my ride or die creed
Ramming my fist up your ass... bitch I don’t believe in no motherfucking pleads
What… you had to get permission to battle some more
Don’t hide behind no ‘legit’ word
Let the casings rip as your blood from your wounds pour
The dump your ass in the Jersey Shore
I will skin your ass alive just for boredom, my type of fun
Nope... we ain’t even done
Roll your ass in my carpet then smoke you like a joint
With that girly ass bravo, you must ain’t got the point
Sniffing around me not making no nose
Bitch meet my on the front line, you best to bring your boys
You cannot take me down you still hiding
Hacking up that M, stomping the T, and razoring you with the P, you know ain’t lying
Then tossing you over a bridge, head first
And word up… you won’t be flying
I’m on your turf
Come on off that wooden chair and claim your worth
Let’s up this this game, you want to borrow my royal crown
Give you some courage Tin Man before our hands put up and our shit goes down
Fuck a Glock, my hollow points too good for you, I will slice and dice you without making a sound
Then taking over your clit until she becomes my pet, before, I take her ass out to join your bloody flesh as the vultures circle around and around
I told you I am the Mafia and the Gangster you hiding out from
Will fuck you and your crew up, then watch them pump you in your asshole until they all cum
Reducing you to the sticky shit under my shoe like bubble gum
You a little bitch that keeps talking shit
Try to cash it in, your dog will be sniffing your remains found buried in a ditch
I told Eminem about your dead beat ass
He said he do not battle with a man who dresses up and parading his dick around like he a fag
You have tested me cool
Lying on in this site, like your know the rules
Son.. I’m about to take your GED ass back to my school
Naw… you know I do not get down with your trying to pump your tits out like that
DUP…this is my gig… I am the clawing kitty cat
All up in your face… the tigress coming for that ass, with my acid, my Glock and bashing your head in with your child’s baseball bat
And just like that
It’s best you kiss your cunt and those inbreed kids
I’m the dirty sheriff... I decide if you die or live
You best recognize while I crawl up through your mouth and then invade your mind
Life to me is nothing but cell bars and doing maximum security time
Just did a solid nine to twenty-five
You best come correct
You don’t… I will snuff you out, and your peeps will see how you got served after you’ve been straight dealt
I will reach out and touch you.. put you to sleep and wait for the news how your family wept
You better cease thinking about my motherfucking name
I am life bitch and death when watching your breaths become an obituary after tasting my twisted domain
These fucks about ready to see your ass dragged while eating my shit... as I stand on your back, and the power of my fame
Bitchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Signed With Your Blood,
By who really gives a fuck!
You an imposter wannabe fake ass poet who ran once my Glock’s bullets turned your route
I told you I own the air you breathe
It’s no escaping me...
And you know my ride or die creed
Ramming my fist up your ass... bitch I don’t believe in no motherfucking pleads
What… you had to get permission to battle some more
Don’t hide behind no ‘legit’ word
Let the casings rip as your blood from your wounds pour
The dump your ass in the Jersey Shore
I will skin your ass alive just for boredom, my type of fun
Nope... we ain’t even done
Roll your ass in my carpet then smoke you like a joint
With that girly ass bravo, you must ain’t got the point
Sniffing around me not making no nose
Bitch meet my on the front line, you best to bring your boys
You cannot take me down you still hiding
Hacking up that M, stomping the T, and razoring you with the P, you know ain’t lying
Then tossing you over a bridge, head first
And word up… you won’t be flying
I’m on your turf
Come on off that wooden chair and claim your worth
Let’s up this this game, you want to borrow my royal crown
Give you some courage Tin Man before our hands put up and our shit goes down
Fuck a Glock, my hollow points too good for you, I will slice and dice you without making a sound
Then taking over your clit until she becomes my pet, before, I take her ass out to join your bloody flesh as the vultures circle around and around
I told you I am the Mafia and the Gangster you hiding out from
Will fuck you and your crew up, then watch them pump you in your asshole until they all cum
Reducing you to the sticky shit under my shoe like bubble gum
You a little bitch that keeps talking shit
Try to cash it in, your dog will be sniffing your remains found buried in a ditch
I told Eminem about your dead beat ass
He said he do not battle with a man who dresses up and parading his dick around like he a fag
You have tested me cool
Lying on in this site, like your know the rules
Son.. I’m about to take your GED ass back to my school
Naw… you know I do not get down with your trying to pump your tits out like that
DUP…this is my gig… I am the clawing kitty cat
All up in your face… the tigress coming for that ass, with my acid, my Glock and bashing your head in with your child’s baseball bat
And just like that
It’s best you kiss your cunt and those inbreed kids
I’m the dirty sheriff... I decide if you die or live
You best recognize while I crawl up through your mouth and then invade your mind
Life to me is nothing but cell bars and doing maximum security time
Just did a solid nine to twenty-five
You best come correct
You don’t… I will snuff you out, and your peeps will see how you got served after you’ve been straight dealt
I will reach out and touch you.. put you to sleep and wait for the news how your family wept
You better cease thinking about my motherfucking name
I am life bitch and death when watching your breaths become an obituary after tasting my twisted domain
These fucks about ready to see your ass dragged while eating my shit... as I stand on your back, and the power of my fame
Bitchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Signed With Your Blood,
By who really gives a fuck!
Published 9th Jul 2021
| Edited 10th Jul 2021
Author's Note
SKC- Just Evening The Score.. Nothing to see here folks move on... at..at..at.. not you
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9th Jul 2021 5:47pm
9th Jul 2021 11:32pm
It's all about the Benjamins my Kingpin.. you either shut up or you put up, ride or die.. and that's word up gangsta style
Much oblige you visiting my hood...peace
Much oblige you visiting my hood...peace
10th Jul 2021 4:33pm
Democracy rules. We put it to a vote across two poetry platforms (not just this corrupt DUP dump). FYI, AllPoetry.(com) has ~200k active and serious poet users. The votes came in over the course of two day, and it was UNANIMOUS, you choked. I’m done with you now BUT you did block my girlfriend just the other day. She wants a piece of you? She’s more deadly than me? Do you think you can cope with that? Why don’t you unblock her and show her what kind of unpotent-c u (n)tote?
Her user name is “mantisdeer”.
Beware, it’s your throat.
MTP#^)
Her user name is “mantisdeer”.
Beware, it’s your throat.
MTP#^)
10th Jul 2021 4:46pm
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/424315-blocked-letters-abc/
No, SKC didn't kill ANY body.
But whatever you need to tell yourself, Numer90
in order to sleep at night.
MTP#^)
No, SKC didn't kill ANY body.
But whatever you need to tell yourself, Numer90
in order to sleep at night.
MTP#^)
10th Jul 2021 6:45pm
Back this shit up.. so you two motherfuckers conspiring againt me 'trying' to take me down.. she had a shot at this, the bitch failed... if she was true to her game, she would had told you to rap your shit up the minute you start dreaming...
I blocked a fake ass profile who I know was a stank ass cunt in the beginning..
If she wants to act like a queen with a dick then let her fuck you in your ass.. you're history...son
I blocked a fake ass profile who I know was a stank ass cunt in the beginning..
If she wants to act like a queen with a dick then let her fuck you in your ass.. you're history...son
10th Jul 2021 6:49pm
No, SKC5 LOST by a unanimous vote of peers.
Hundreds of people read the rap battle across both DUP and AllPoetry.
The score is 8:3 favoring MTP (I, myself, even voted for SKC as a courtesy).
Voting details are below...
AllPoetry link:
https://allpoetry.com/poem/15981503--REAL---Rap-Battle--Please-cast-your-vote-for-the-winner-in-the-c-by-MTP-adult
DUP link:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/423763-rap-battle-spittin-hairs-skc5-vs-mtp/
Here are the detailed results:
1.) AP user: A.M83 - Loving the lines from both sides, but both are tied in my mind. But here's a dime, thanks for the rhyme. Honestly, if I had to choose, it'd be MTP. Both of y'all are well done, but MTP had the better lines in my not so humble opinion. (Don't mind the shittty beginning. There's a reason Rhyme poetry is not seen among my works.)
2.) DUP user: Em-ily - Okay, time to render judgement: ...Winner is... MTP. Cause I know some facts, and fact number one is, as sharp, keen, deadly, and true as our Beautiful Queen (SKC5) keeps her razor? That mofo the Duke MTP carries his shit intentionally dulled, rusted, and badly warped, all in order to inflict MAXIMUM, UN-HEALABLE DAMAGE. Now that's a sick twist. 😻
3.) AP user: gggoddly - You DEFINITELY won!
4.) AP user: Kostas Lagos - Damn, this is tough. I think you won this one MTP. By a buzzer beater!
5.) AP user: Georgeyall - Yeah I just love the way you wrote this amazing work 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
6.) DUP user: mantisdeer - Haha you wrecked her. Was that the last comment from her? Overall sck had weak rhymes that anyone could shit out. Your responses are full fleshed and vivid, eviscerating the crayon scrawl on the boy's bathroom wall.
7.) DUP user: arortiz73 - Being well studied in language art mechanics, extremely anal retentive about details, and a constitutionalist to fault, I must adhere to both my objectivity and ethics. Even though the caliber of art displayed here from MTP exceeded that of SKC5, I must in the spirit of preserving the future of battles like this, vote for SKC5 in that she was the only user on DUP with the grit to take on another poet in a head to head battle of well, heads.
8.) AP user: Terry Volbrecht - After a slow start the pussycat more than held her own, but in the end I'd say she lost by a whisker. Both fighters showed great verbal inventiveness, but I felt the need for a more compelling narrative thrust from both contestants. At times I felt myself praying for a TKO, but have to raise the dripping red glove of MTP, a worthy winner on points, as darkness descends of this Theatre of Cruelty. de Sade in his grave must be laughing himself to death. In the re-match, I'd like to see which of these vomit-spewing virtuosos can create more beauty on the other side of arse poetica. The Shadow needs to be integrated, not worshipped, IMO.
9.) DUP user: Billy_Snagg - 1 vote for SweetKittyCat5 (by default).
10.) DUP user: Numer90 - 1 vote for SweetKittyCat5 (because SKC said so).
11.) DUP user: nutbuster (D C) - I won your rap battle (SELF VOTE) 1 vote for nutbuster (D C)
12.) AP user: Fearless Lines - Honestly, these two are just awesome and even a bit confused to know the best. I love their words usage and the structure they both adopted. But if I'm to choose, I hang my hands up for MTP
VOTING CLOSES DUE TO DAYS OF INACTIVITY.
MTP WINS BY UNANIMOUS DECISION!
Hundreds of people read the rap battle across both DUP and AllPoetry.
The score is 8:3 favoring MTP (I, myself, even voted for SKC as a courtesy).
Voting details are below...
AllPoetry link:
https://allpoetry.com/poem/15981503--REAL---Rap-Battle--Please-cast-your-vote-for-the-winner-in-the-c-by-MTP-adult
DUP link:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/423763-rap-battle-spittin-hairs-skc5-vs-mtp/
Here are the detailed results:
1.) AP user: A.M83 - Loving the lines from both sides, but both are tied in my mind. But here's a dime, thanks for the rhyme. Honestly, if I had to choose, it'd be MTP. Both of y'all are well done, but MTP had the better lines in my not so humble opinion. (Don't mind the shittty beginning. There's a reason Rhyme poetry is not seen among my works.)
2.) DUP user: Em-ily - Okay, time to render judgement: ...Winner is... MTP. Cause I know some facts, and fact number one is, as sharp, keen, deadly, and true as our Beautiful Queen (SKC5) keeps her razor? That mofo the Duke MTP carries his shit intentionally dulled, rusted, and badly warped, all in order to inflict MAXIMUM, UN-HEALABLE DAMAGE. Now that's a sick twist. 😻
3.) AP user: gggoddly - You DEFINITELY won!
4.) AP user: Kostas Lagos - Damn, this is tough. I think you won this one MTP. By a buzzer beater!
5.) AP user: Georgeyall - Yeah I just love the way you wrote this amazing work 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
6.) DUP user: mantisdeer - Haha you wrecked her. Was that the last comment from her? Overall sck had weak rhymes that anyone could shit out. Your responses are full fleshed and vivid, eviscerating the crayon scrawl on the boy's bathroom wall.
7.) DUP user: arortiz73 - Being well studied in language art mechanics, extremely anal retentive about details, and a constitutionalist to fault, I must adhere to both my objectivity and ethics. Even though the caliber of art displayed here from MTP exceeded that of SKC5, I must in the spirit of preserving the future of battles like this, vote for SKC5 in that she was the only user on DUP with the grit to take on another poet in a head to head battle of well, heads.
8.) AP user: Terry Volbrecht - After a slow start the pussycat more than held her own, but in the end I'd say she lost by a whisker. Both fighters showed great verbal inventiveness, but I felt the need for a more compelling narrative thrust from both contestants. At times I felt myself praying for a TKO, but have to raise the dripping red glove of MTP, a worthy winner on points, as darkness descends of this Theatre of Cruelty. de Sade in his grave must be laughing himself to death. In the re-match, I'd like to see which of these vomit-spewing virtuosos can create more beauty on the other side of arse poetica. The Shadow needs to be integrated, not worshipped, IMO.
9.) DUP user: Billy_Snagg - 1 vote for SweetKittyCat5 (by default).
10.) DUP user: Numer90 - 1 vote for SweetKittyCat5 (because SKC said so).
11.) DUP user: nutbuster (D C) - I won your rap battle (SELF VOTE) 1 vote for nutbuster (D C)
12.) AP user: Fearless Lines - Honestly, these two are just awesome and even a bit confused to know the best. I love their words usage and the structure they both adopted. But if I'm to choose, I hang my hands up for MTP
VOTING CLOSES DUE TO DAYS OF INACTIVITY.
MTP WINS BY UNANIMOUS DECISION!
10th Jul 2021 7:07pm
If that is what you want to tell yourself... you need to stop taking the Ritalin because it has your ass hallucinate
Oh.. and for your cunt who I already took care off.. Let me refresh your memory bitch.. then I took care of that ass in private..
(This was for your cunt.... bitch... like I told you... I do not look back. and the sad part she tried to plead your case in private- until I hammered the head)
My Butter Rum
No my blue-eye spitfire I don’t get done like that
Fuck that nice kitty and the purring cat
I do not take kindly with no stank ass pale face cunt taking my name or my creed in vain
I will fuck you up royally and then bring the hammer for the motherfuckin pain
Stuff those butterflies down your throat make you think you can really fly
After that you will be shitting out caterpillars and that’s no fucking lie
You ain't nothing but a trick to me, ass up and been tossed around
I give everyone here humbling respect until you show your claws, then the shit goes down
Don’t get me twisted I can make anything much worsen
Give me some real thrills while teasing my tits then you can roll your tongue to my creamy slit, tongue bathe it like you in person
Sticking your small chest out like you the motherfucking man
I will bend you over hoe, ram my curling iron up your cunt, bite your lips off just to see how much pain you can really stand
Paper slash your ass with my paycheck... oh no, I am not done yet
You done ran in the wrong court huffing and puffing spilling that coochie poppy shit
It’s always best to serve up a spiteful bitch with their own horny dog’s dick
Yeah go on and suck his nutts
Now swallow it, yeah that’s right, a bitter pill when your think you trying to power up
You don’t know me at all like that its best to introduce myself
To let you know the shit you about to be dealt
All that straight up talk above that’s only foreplay
Na’ll... you need some intellect poetic bullshit slung your way
Don’t you worry about my comments, replying, or whose sniffing in this butter rum ass
You continue to play with your Barbara dolls over there in the corner or I will put you out like bloody biohazard trash
Or who the hell I'm bewitching, making dicks wishing, or whose lips smacking for some honey slit licking
Bringing my creed down to the level of a ill-reputed most likely molested, self-mutilated child
You try shitting on my manifesto with that false bravado mental bullshit, you best make sure to play it out for a while
You lucky we’re not in the dark, I will slowly burn your sorry ass, you will think you done seen the devil
Then shoot you up with pure cane and leave in the bevel
Popping that immature yang
Stay out my way and stay in your fucking lane
You know what my crew do to country looking ass pale face cunts like you
Choke you, fuck you with your own daddy’s dick and make you watch while your mommy eat poisonous rat food
And do have a nice day as well and you can kiss my ass!
Dark Poems : My Butter Rum : DU Poetry (deepundergroundpoetry.com)
Oh.. and for your cunt who I already took care off.. Let me refresh your memory bitch.. then I took care of that ass in private..
(This was for your cunt.... bitch... like I told you... I do not look back. and the sad part she tried to plead your case in private- until I hammered the head)
My Butter Rum
No my blue-eye spitfire I don’t get done like that
Fuck that nice kitty and the purring cat
I do not take kindly with no stank ass pale face cunt taking my name or my creed in vain
I will fuck you up royally and then bring the hammer for the motherfuckin pain
Stuff those butterflies down your throat make you think you can really fly
After that you will be shitting out caterpillars and that’s no fucking lie
You ain't nothing but a trick to me, ass up and been tossed around
I give everyone here humbling respect until you show your claws, then the shit goes down
Don’t get me twisted I can make anything much worsen
Give me some real thrills while teasing my tits then you can roll your tongue to my creamy slit, tongue bathe it like you in person
Sticking your small chest out like you the motherfucking man
I will bend you over hoe, ram my curling iron up your cunt, bite your lips off just to see how much pain you can really stand
Paper slash your ass with my paycheck... oh no, I am not done yet
You done ran in the wrong court huffing and puffing spilling that coochie poppy shit
It’s always best to serve up a spiteful bitch with their own horny dog’s dick
Yeah go on and suck his nutts
Now swallow it, yeah that’s right, a bitter pill when your think you trying to power up
You don’t know me at all like that its best to introduce myself
To let you know the shit you about to be dealt
All that straight up talk above that’s only foreplay
Na’ll... you need some intellect poetic bullshit slung your way
Don’t you worry about my comments, replying, or whose sniffing in this butter rum ass
You continue to play with your Barbara dolls over there in the corner or I will put you out like bloody biohazard trash
Or who the hell I'm bewitching, making dicks wishing, or whose lips smacking for some honey slit licking
Bringing my creed down to the level of a ill-reputed most likely molested, self-mutilated child
You try shitting on my manifesto with that false bravado mental bullshit, you best make sure to play it out for a while
You lucky we’re not in the dark, I will slowly burn your sorry ass, you will think you done seen the devil
Then shoot you up with pure cane and leave in the bevel
Popping that immature yang
Stay out my way and stay in your fucking lane
You know what my crew do to country looking ass pale face cunts like you
Choke you, fuck you with your own daddy’s dick and make you watch while your mommy eat poisonous rat food
And do have a nice day as well and you can kiss my ass!
Dark Poems : My Butter Rum : DU Poetry (deepundergroundpoetry.com)
10th Jul 2021 7:15pm
"mantisdeer", my girlfriend, challenged you.
Take here on without getting me involved.
She doesn't need my help.
Compared to her heavy intellect, mine is merely sheer.
UNBLOCK her if you actually mean what you say...
Unless you're too inhibited by fear, in which case, steer
the other direction. She and I will do what we want
with our erections.
This is simply in response to what you just said. MTP#^)
<q>SKC5 said:
"Back this shit up.. so you two motherfuckers conspiring againt me 'trying' to take me down.. she had a shot at this, the bitch failed... if she was true to her game, she would had told you to rap your shit up the minute you start dreaming... I blocked a fake ass profile who I know was a stank ass cunt in the beginning.. If she wants to act like a queen with a dick then let her fuck you in your ass.. you're history...son"</q>
There you go, that is your shit that you wanted us to "back up".
Take here on without getting me involved.
She doesn't need my help.
Compared to her heavy intellect, mine is merely sheer.
UNBLOCK her if you actually mean what you say...
Unless you're too inhibited by fear, in which case, steer
the other direction. She and I will do what we want
with our erections.
This is simply in response to what you just said. MTP#^)
<q>SKC5 said:
"Back this shit up.. so you two motherfuckers conspiring againt me 'trying' to take me down.. she had a shot at this, the bitch failed... if she was true to her game, she would had told you to rap your shit up the minute you start dreaming... I blocked a fake ass profile who I know was a stank ass cunt in the beginning.. If she wants to act like a queen with a dick then let her fuck you in your ass.. you're history...son"</q>
There you go, that is your shit that you wanted us to "back up".
10th Jul 2021 7:18pm
10th Jul 2021 7:27pm
Did you not read above.. she got fucked up...
I got pressing matters to attend then wasting my time on a dark roasted nut.. the bitch ought to came correct instead of hiding behind fake ass 'royalty'... I smelt that trashy clit in heat...
So don't throw me no game.. I lead motherfuckers... I don't follow... bitches be gone...
I got pressing matters to attend then wasting my time on a dark roasted nut.. the bitch ought to came correct instead of hiding behind fake ass 'royalty'... I smelt that trashy clit in heat...
So don't throw me no game.. I lead motherfuckers... I don't follow... bitches be gone...
10th Jul 2021 7:39pm
And your attempt to rap is in parallel to your manhood.. very small in conveying its true nature ….
Damn baby great poem. My motto is kill or be killed. Let the dark side come out and play. Keep on writing my Erotic Queen of Love.
9th Jul 2021 11:35pm
Duces on that motto.. I feel you... A Glock hit to feel the burn, ashes to ashes.. time to rest in that Urn...
New York baby.. all the way live...
New York baby.. all the way live...
9th Jul 2021 11:38pm
9th Jul 2021 11:45pm
Business before pleasure.. stay focused... you ready to do this pimp.. okay.. then let's move out.... and we move in on the count of thre.. one.. two.. three..
Blaze!
Blaze!
9th Jul 2021 11:56pm
10th Jul 2021 00:27am
You alright my handsome poet.. You got a place in my organization after all... as my number one runner.. not go out and represent and why you out there.. duck and ask questions later
Gone...
Gone...
10th Jul 2021 4:07am
10th Jul 2021 12:33pm
Silence is the factor of doing and not saying.. gangsta style...
Let's Roll...
Let's Roll...
10th Jul 2021 4:37pm
I am the “bad people”... I, and my girlfriend mantisdeer, and we’re still very alive.
MTP#^)
MTP#^)
10th Jul 2021 7:17pm
Fuck you and fuck her.. only a loser keeps festering his own brain... You need me to prescribe some stronger meds for you.. Keep it stepping.. you wasting my time cry baby...
10th Jul 2021 7:34pm
I'm here because I enjoy eating your soul.
Tell me... why are YOU here???
MTP#^)
Tell me... why are YOU here???
MTP#^)
10th Jul 2021 1:09am
now I know how Jersy got it's name the garden state from all the trash toss from the kind of good side of NYC that is
stright from the Godfather
sweet my friend
stright from the Godfather
sweet my friend
10th Jul 2021 12:32pm
Thank you Godfather... I do hope you are packing and ready to point and aim..
11th Jul 2021 7:22pm
yes in every way my friend I am bit under the weather soon will be better
be safe
be safe
10th Jul 2021 6:36pm
VOTING IS COMPLETE. The score is 8:3 (favoring MTP)
MTP wins by unanimous vote of peers.
Votes were collected from both DUP & AllPoetry.
AllPoetry link:
https://allpoetry.com/poem/15981503--REAL---Rap-Battle--Please-cast-your-vote-for-the-winner-in-the-c-by-MTP-adult
DUP link:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/423763-rap-battle-spittin-hairs-skc5-vs-mtp/
Here are the detailed results:
1.) AP user: A.M83 - Loving the lines from both sides, but both are tied in my mind. But here's a dime, thanks for the rhyme. Honestly, if I had to choose, it'd be MTP. Both of y'all are well done, but MTP had the better lines in my not so humble opinion. (Don't mind the shittty beginning. There's a reason Rhyme poetry is not seen among my works.)
2.) DUP user: Em-ily - Okay, time to render judgement: ...Winner is... MTP. Cause I know some facts, and fact number one is, as sharp, keen, deadly, and true as our Beautiful Queen (SKC5) keeps her razor? That mofo the Duke MTP carries his shit intentionally dulled, rusted, and badly warped, all in order to inflict MAXIMUM, UN-HEALABLE DAMAGE. Now that's a sick twist. 😻
3.) AP user: gggoddly - You DEFINITELY won!
4.) AP user: Kostas Lagos - Damn, this is tough. I think you won this one MTP. By a buzzer beater!
5.) AP user: Georgeyall - Yeah I just love the way you wrote this amazing work 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
6.) DUP user: mantisdeer - Haha you wrecked her. Was that the last comment from her? Overall sck had weak rhymes that anyone could shit out. Your responses are full fleshed and vivid, eviscerating the crayon scrawl on the boy's bathroom wall.
7.) DUP user: arortiz73 - Being well studied in language art mechanics, extremely anal retentive about details, and a constitutionalist to fault, I must adhere to both my objectivity and ethics. Even though the caliber of art displayed here from MTP exceeded that of SKC5, I must in the spirit of preserving the future of battles like this, vote for SKC5 in that she was the only user on DUP with the grit to take on another poet in a head to head battle of well, heads.
8.) AP user: Terry Volbrecht - After a slow start the pussycat more than held her own, but in the end I'd say she lost by a whisker. Both fighters showed great verbal inventiveness, but I felt the need for a more compelling narrative thrust from both contestants. At times I felt myself praying for a TKO, but have to raise the dripping red glove of MTP, a worthy winner on points, as darkness descends of this Theatre of Cruelty. de Sade in his grave must be laughing himself to death. In the re-match, I'd like to see which of these vomit-spewing virtuosos can create more beauty on the other side of arse poetica. The Shadow needs to be integrated, not worshipped, IMO.
9.) DUP user: Billy_Snagg - 1 vote for SweetKittyCat5 (by default).
10.) DUP user: Numer90 - 1 vote for SweetKittyCat5 (because SKC said so).
11.) DUP user: nutbuster (D C) - I won your rap battle (SELF VOTE) 1 vote for nutbuster (D C)
12.) AP user: Fearless Lines - Honestly, these two are just awesome and even a bit confused to know the best. I love their words usage and the structure they both adopted. But if I'm to choose, I hang my hands up for MTP
VOTING CLOSES DUE TO DAYS OF INACTIVITY.
MTP WINS BY UNANIMOUS DECISION!
MTP wins by unanimous vote of peers.
Votes were collected from both DUP & AllPoetry.
AllPoetry link:
https://allpoetry.com/poem/15981503--REAL---Rap-Battle--Please-cast-your-vote-for-the-winner-in-the-c-by-MTP-adult
DUP link:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/423763-rap-battle-spittin-hairs-skc5-vs-mtp/
Here are the detailed results:
1.) AP user: A.M83 - Loving the lines from both sides, but both are tied in my mind. But here's a dime, thanks for the rhyme. Honestly, if I had to choose, it'd be MTP. Both of y'all are well done, but MTP had the better lines in my not so humble opinion. (Don't mind the shittty beginning. There's a reason Rhyme poetry is not seen among my works.)
2.) DUP user: Em-ily - Okay, time to render judgement: ...Winner is... MTP. Cause I know some facts, and fact number one is, as sharp, keen, deadly, and true as our Beautiful Queen (SKC5) keeps her razor? That mofo the Duke MTP carries his shit intentionally dulled, rusted, and badly warped, all in order to inflict MAXIMUM, UN-HEALABLE DAMAGE. Now that's a sick twist. 😻
3.) AP user: gggoddly - You DEFINITELY won!
4.) AP user: Kostas Lagos - Damn, this is tough. I think you won this one MTP. By a buzzer beater!
5.) AP user: Georgeyall - Yeah I just love the way you wrote this amazing work 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
6.) DUP user: mantisdeer - Haha you wrecked her. Was that the last comment from her? Overall sck had weak rhymes that anyone could shit out. Your responses are full fleshed and vivid, eviscerating the crayon scrawl on the boy's bathroom wall.
7.) DUP user: arortiz73 - Being well studied in language art mechanics, extremely anal retentive about details, and a constitutionalist to fault, I must adhere to both my objectivity and ethics. Even though the caliber of art displayed here from MTP exceeded that of SKC5, I must in the spirit of preserving the future of battles like this, vote for SKC5 in that she was the only user on DUP with the grit to take on another poet in a head to head battle of well, heads.
8.) AP user: Terry Volbrecht - After a slow start the pussycat more than held her own, but in the end I'd say she lost by a whisker. Both fighters showed great verbal inventiveness, but I felt the need for a more compelling narrative thrust from both contestants. At times I felt myself praying for a TKO, but have to raise the dripping red glove of MTP, a worthy winner on points, as darkness descends of this Theatre of Cruelty. de Sade in his grave must be laughing himself to death. In the re-match, I'd like to see which of these vomit-spewing virtuosos can create more beauty on the other side of arse poetica. The Shadow needs to be integrated, not worshipped, IMO.
9.) DUP user: Billy_Snagg - 1 vote for SweetKittyCat5 (by default).
10.) DUP user: Numer90 - 1 vote for SweetKittyCat5 (because SKC said so).
11.) DUP user: nutbuster (D C) - I won your rap battle (SELF VOTE) 1 vote for nutbuster (D C)
12.) AP user: Fearless Lines - Honestly, these two are just awesome and even a bit confused to know the best. I love their words usage and the structure they both adopted. But if I'm to choose, I hang my hands up for MTP
VOTING CLOSES DUE TO DAYS OF INACTIVITY.
MTP WINS BY UNANIMOUS DECISION!
10th Jul 2021 7:42pm
Mantisdeer responded to you, SKC5...
Mantisdeer said: "Aww the kitty cat is too scared to try me! 🤭 5kared to lose again.
Make sure to relay to her that ad hominem attacks about me and my pussy don't bother me. I'M ONLY MORE TURNED ON TO FIGHT! 😈😘"
UNBLOCK HER IF YOU REALLY WANT TO BATTLE HER.
I have never blocked you or ANYONE on this site.
I deal with EVERYTHING directly.
This fact alone, shows a stark difference between you and me.
MTP#^)
Mantisdeer said: "Aww the kitty cat is too scared to try me! 🤭 5kared to lose again.
Make sure to relay to her that ad hominem attacks about me and my pussy don't bother me. I'M ONLY MORE TURNED ON TO FIGHT! 😈😘"
UNBLOCK HER IF YOU REALLY WANT TO BATTLE HER.
I have never blocked you or ANYONE on this site.
I deal with EVERYTHING directly.
This fact alone, shows a stark difference between you and me.
MTP#^)
10th Jul 2021 7:48pm
