deepundergroundpoetry.com
dinner party: we sit
thinking what a very beautiful
woman she
is doubtless thinking what a pathetic old git ..
Published 6th Jul 2021
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 4
reading list entries 1
comments 11
reads 280
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
6th Jul 2021 2:24am
6th Jul 2021 11:48pm
7th Jul 2021 00:46am
6th Jul 2021 3:49am
6th Jul 2021 11:50pm
6th Jul 2021 3:20pm
6th Jul 2021 11:53pm
6th Jul 2021 11:27pm
I like how it flows from the title (including subtle rhyme). Lovely poignant little picture of life.
6th Jul 2021 11:54pm
8th Jul 2021 11:06pm
Nice piece, but think highly of yourself (or rather, don't belittle yourself).
