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Begin Again (Tomorrow)
Show me a brand new day (x2)
Show me a brand new day
So I can be a brand new man tomorrow
Help me fight away my dismay, my anger, my worries, and my sorrow
Show me another way and surely I'll follow
Show me a brand new day
And I'll begin again tomorrow
Take me by the hand
Show me to my promised land
Help me understand
Where I come from, who I am
Tell me what to do
And surely I'll listen
Which path should I pursue
In order to fulfill my mission
Won't you be my guide?
Show me through this cold, dark night
I don't wanna run and hide
I just wanna know it's all alright
I've seen the light of my own soul
But the clouds continue to roll
I don't wanna hide from you anymore
I don't wanna hide away anymore
Show me a brand new day (X2)
Take me by the hand
Show me to my promised land
Help me understand
Where I come from, who I am
I've seen the light of my own soul
But the clouds continue to roll
I don't wanna hide from you anymore
I don't wanna hide away anymore
Show me a brand new day
And I'll be a better man tomorrow
Help me fight away my dismay, my anger, my worries, and my sorrow
Show me another way and surely I'll follow
( Show me a brand new day
And I'll begin again tomorrow (x3) )
Show me a brand new day
Then I'll begin again (again) tomorrow
Show me a brand new day
So I can be a brand new man tomorrow
Help me fight away my dismay, my anger, my worries, and my sorrow
Show me another way and surely I'll follow
Show me a brand new day
And I'll begin again tomorrow
Take me by the hand
Show me to my promised land
Help me understand
Where I come from, who I am
Tell me what to do
And surely I'll listen
Which path should I pursue
In order to fulfill my mission
Won't you be my guide?
Show me through this cold, dark night
I don't wanna run and hide
I just wanna know it's all alright
I've seen the light of my own soul
But the clouds continue to roll
I don't wanna hide from you anymore
I don't wanna hide away anymore
Show me a brand new day (X2)
Take me by the hand
Show me to my promised land
Help me understand
Where I come from, who I am
I've seen the light of my own soul
But the clouds continue to roll
I don't wanna hide from you anymore
I don't wanna hide away anymore
Show me a brand new day
And I'll be a better man tomorrow
Help me fight away my dismay, my anger, my worries, and my sorrow
Show me another way and surely I'll follow
( Show me a brand new day
And I'll begin again tomorrow (x3) )
Show me a brand new day
Then I'll begin again (again) tomorrow
Published 30th Jun 2021
| Edited 3rd Jul 2021
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30th Jun 2021 9:48pm
30th Jun 2021 10:06pm
Oh, I've got a melody. But, I'd love to hear what you come up with! Thank you so much! :)
30th Jun 2021 10:08pm
The pleasure is all mine! Can't wait to immerse myself in the works of others and be inspired by all the wonderful artists here, including yourself. :)
And, if you're interested, here is how I hear it: https://clyp.it/4ukaeoys
(Mind you, I only play drums, so I have to awkwardly mimic the instrumental parts... Hoping my songs might actually be accompanied by real music one day. Lol)
And, if you're interested, here is how I hear it: https://clyp.it/4ukaeoys
(Mind you, I only play drums, so I have to awkwardly mimic the instrumental parts... Hoping my songs might actually be accompanied by real music one day. Lol)
30th Jun 2021 11:29pm
30th Jun 2021 11:30pm
30th Jun 2021 11:33pm
30th Jun 2021 11:41pm
30th Jun 2021 11:43pm
That's one of the most unique compliments I've heard. xD
But, yeah. If you wanna find a way to collab, I'd be down. :)
But, yeah. If you wanna find a way to collab, I'd be down. :)
1st Jul 2021 00:19am
1st Jul 2021 00:26am
Awe, thank you so much for the kind words and the warm welcome. I'm truly grateful. And happy to be here. 😊
1st Jul 2021 4:56am
Dear B,
Lovely write. I found myself thinking more along the lines of a prayer as opposed to song. Yet, I can see a song in this for sure. I really appreciated the offering of
“ Show me a brand new day (x2)” as hope for a change in oneself for the better and knowing there’s room for improvement. Terrific write and welcome to DU. H🌷
Lovely write. I found myself thinking more along the lines of a prayer as opposed to song. Yet, I can see a song in this for sure. I really appreciated the offering of
“ Show me a brand new day (x2)” as hope for a change in oneself for the better and knowing there’s room for improvement. Terrific write and welcome to DU. H🌷
I love your thoughts on it being a prayer, as I suppose that's kind of what it is... Thank you so much for the lovely feedback. Those are such thoughtful words. :)
If you're interested, here's a recording of how I hear it: https://clyp.it/4ukaeoys
(As mentioned in another comment: I only play drums, so till I have the music to accompany my songs, I'm left to awkwardly mimic the instrumental parts. 🙈 )
If you're interested, here's a recording of how I hear it: https://clyp.it/4ukaeoys
(As mentioned in another comment: I only play drums, so till I have the music to accompany my songs, I'm left to awkwardly mimic the instrumental parts. 🙈 )
