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To Be Forever Young
Published 29th Jun 2021
Author's Note
I posted this particular poem two years ago.. I re-edited for the visual concept
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29th Jun 2021 5:39am
We are young at heart including you. Keep on writing my Erotic Queen of Love.
29th Jun 2021 6:02am
A beautiful re-presentation of this poem as a visual. As someone who sees myself as young at heart (60-something or 'sexagenarian') I amen this.
Favourite lines (these are certainly true of your poetry):
Forever young a beautiful acclamation I can still utter
Erotic skills to melt cold butter
Favourite lines (these are certainly true of your poetry):
Forever young a beautiful acclamation I can still utter
Erotic skills to melt cold butter
29th Jun 2021 1:51pm
You had me at "my approval engraved on bedposts." My god, what a thought! And, your pearly chains formed a perfect connection between words and image.
30th Jun 2021 9:30am
Forever young
And your sweet ink is forever magnificent
Whether 2 years,or 2 days old
Never tire of your rhyme, rhythm, and eroticism
And your sweet ink is forever magnificent
Whether 2 years,or 2 days old
Never tire of your rhyme, rhythm, and eroticism
30th Jun 2021 7:12pm
young at heart I be as the rest is all wrinkeled and limp or falling out hair wihte as snow as the heart beats as a young man in his late teens Lol
