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You sound like a pig
Tell me why do you snore so loud in bed,
shaking the pictures and walls ?
The noises you make drill straight through my head,
tell me why do you snore so loud in bed.
When there’s nose clips to wear or oils to be spread
and you just sleep through it all.
Tell me why do you snore so loud in bed
shaking the pictures and walls ?
Tell me why do you sound like a pig she said,
digging my ribs with her fist?
each night you find a new nerve to shred
Tell me why do you sound like a pig she said,
please sleep down stairs or simply desist
there's moments I wish you didn't exist.
Tell me why do you sound like a pig she said,
digging my ribs with her fist?
shaking the pictures and walls ?
The noises you make drill straight through my head,
tell me why do you snore so loud in bed.
When there’s nose clips to wear or oils to be spread
and you just sleep through it all.
Tell me why do you snore so loud in bed
shaking the pictures and walls ?
Tell me why do you sound like a pig she said,
digging my ribs with her fist?
each night you find a new nerve to shred
Tell me why do you sound like a pig she said,
please sleep down stairs or simply desist
there's moments I wish you didn't exist.
Tell me why do you sound like a pig she said,
digging my ribs with her fist?
Published 24th Jun 2021
| Edited 5th Oct 2021
Author's Note
I cant remember the name of the form this one follows but it has one :)
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24th Jun 2021 7:16pm
Now this is hilarious my poet.. I can come to appreciate a man with a sense of humor.. very nicely penned
28th Jun 2021 5:17pm
Many thanks SKC, good to know its working, really appreciate you taking time. R
28th Jun 2021 5:19pm
That was well worth the effort, and you are humbly welcome my poet, always
24th Jun 2021 8:18pm
At first my mind went to a villanelle, but the structure is off. And that’s about as far as my limited knowledge of poem form goes.
Funny as hell though. Good read!
Funny as hell though. Good read!
28th Jun 2021 5:19pm
5th Oct 2021 6:05pm
You struck nerve here! LOL I can recall many nights sleeping on the couch because my partner made the walls shake. So very funny and hit home. I don't think I felt that much contempt and rage. But there were some , " Damn!" moments.
