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There's always more I could say
I hesitate
You want it as much as I want to give it
Yet
I hesitate
Here i can speak freely
The dark opens into light
Good Morning he says
No hesitation ever
I hesitate
You want it as much as I want to give it
Yet
I hesitate
Here i can speak freely
The dark opens into light
Good Morning he says
No hesitation ever
Author's Note
Gouache Painting by Poetspeak enhanced by X44C Technology
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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23rd Jun 2021 12:51pm
Anonymous
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23rd Jun 2021 1:12pm
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23rd Jun 2021 1:48pm
Swash, that's a new one ....
Many thx Lil, think this one does what I wanted .....
Many thx Lil, think this one does what I wanted .....
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23rd Jun 2021 4:51pm
Walking around covering your canvas with your art? This one is a bit more obvious than the last with the tags. Digging the image and your accompanying words.
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23rd Jun 2021 5:03pm
Thanks Lj
I’ve got plenty in my tank
Stay tuned for more, it’s cooking on the grill
Hot and Spicy 🌶
I’ve got plenty in my tank
Stay tuned for more, it’s cooking on the grill
Hot and Spicy 🌶
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Liked this. Made me think what life might have been without the hesitation. Thankful for places where speaking freely is allowed.
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24th Jun 2021 11:17am
There's a lot to think and hesitate about in the love sector, others parts of life too
Poetspeak gospel
Thx for the read and comment Robert
Poetspeak gospel
Thx for the read and comment Robert
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24th Jun 2021 1:56pm
The background being a bright white is brilliant. You understand what you see. Are we the shadows of the bright universe? Like!
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24th Jun 2021 2:17pm
We poets always pay a price so yeah that could be seen that way.
I always feel more comfortable in dark aura so its a comfort zone
Appreciate the read and comment drunkenplaywords of ( dpw) for short ..
Stay tuned
Thx
I always feel more comfortable in dark aura so its a comfort zone
Appreciate the read and comment drunkenplaywords of ( dpw) for short ..
Stay tuned
Thx
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Jun 2021 2:50pm
25th Jun 2021 2:49pm
I speak freely no where.
Wish I could though
So I'll say it with you
Good morning 🙃
Wish I could though
So I'll say it with you
Good morning 🙃
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25th Jun 2021 2:53pm
Dig that upside down 🙃
I use it all the time
Never give up on the morning, seriously
😐 😳😷🤐🥱🖤
I use it all the time
Never give up on the morning, seriously
😐 😳😷🤐🥱🖤
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