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Mr. Wrong
I have never seen anything like
the way you changed
from being Mr. Right
to Mr. Wrong overnight
I let a lot slide
to keep the peace
avoid a lot of unnecessary pain
But this one thing
I admit is and always
will be my biggest complaint
You left my lips so lonesome
Yes...
You should have kissed me more
the way you changed
from being Mr. Right
to Mr. Wrong overnight
I let a lot slide
to keep the peace
avoid a lot of unnecessary pain
But this one thing
I admit is and always
will be my biggest complaint
You left my lips so lonesome
Yes...
You should have kissed me more
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Re. Mr. Wrong
22nd Jun 2021 10:33am
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22nd Jun 2021 12:09pm
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23rd Jun 2021 00:23am
Re. Mr. Wrong
23rd Jun 2021 4:08am
Dear F,
This phrase got me to thinking
“ I let a lot slide
to keep the peace” how often and how long I’ve done just that and in the process losing myself. It’s so ironic how even when you know breaking up is the best thing to do it’s still so difficult. I so appreciate your honest and relatable style of Writing. Xo
H🌷
This phrase got me to thinking
“ I let a lot slide
to keep the peace” how often and how long I’ve done just that and in the process losing myself. It’s so ironic how even when you know breaking up is the best thing to do it’s still so difficult. I so appreciate your honest and relatable style of Writing. Xo
H🌷
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Re: Re. Mr. Wrong
27th Jan 2022 6:22pm
Dear H,
Somehow, I missed reading your wonderful comments. I love hearing from you.
Faith
Somehow, I missed reading your wonderful comments. I love hearing from you.
Faith
Re: Re. Mr. Wrong
27th Jan 2022 6:22pm
Dear H,
Somehow, I missed reading your wonderful comments. I love hearing from you.
Faith
Somehow, I missed reading your wonderful comments. I love hearing from you.
Faith
Re. Mr. Wrong
18th Aug 2021 4:04pm
Aw i have read of soo many too many cases of the lack of romantic love after hot love affairs and steamy dating sessions because even science says romantic love after dating lasts a year. So you are not alone but you muse in an awesome way in fab poetic eloquence ahh. Kudos!!!.
I know of many couples who went straight to marriage without any fornication or dating and who kiss and romance far more several years into the marriage.
Take care dear.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
I know of many couples who went straight to marriage without any fornication or dating and who kiss and romance far more several years into the marriage.
Take care dear.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
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24th Aug 2021 10:18pm
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Re. Mr. Wrong
27th Jan 2022 6:11pm
Hindsight is 20/20. Always amazes me the clarity after a relation. And yes, you should have been kissed more.
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Re: Re. Mr. Wrong
27th Jan 2022 6:20pm
Yes, hindsight is always 20/20! Thanks for your lovely comments. I always appreciate what you have to say!