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Seventh
there may be distant rainbows
hopes in twinkles of stars
in the midnight skies
if I can only see them
I just see shadows
of old yellow ribbons
on leafless trees
bring in the clowns today
those that scream
and walk upside down
for their mirthless smiles
those that squirt tears
from their suffering eyes
remembering with sad hurrahs
Seven months gone
dear one
peace be yours
in rainbowed skies.
Published 19th Jun 2021
Author's Note
In conjunction with Gabe's 7th month travel to Glory. (18.06.2021)
He left on 18.11.2020
He left on 18.11.2020
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19th Jun 2021 6:10am
The love of the our departed our in our hearts
Great dedication poem. Keep on writing.
Great dedication poem. Keep on writing.
19th Jun 2021 7:51am
Anonymous
19th Jun 2021 8:59am
It's still a blink of eye..... Oh, I can feel the ache... .... Writing it out soothes a bit... at least taking the edge off..... I'm glad that you are...
I hear you.
I loved that he had that pic of your mountains on his fridge.... of course he did.... not surprised.
Sending hugs, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 🤗
-B
I hear you.
I loved that he had that pic of your mountains on his fridge.... of course he did.... not surprised.
Sending hugs, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 🤗
-B
19th Jun 2021 11:29am
Dear B, its so nice of you to be here and being understanding. It hits me sometimes, how I will never hear his voice again or get his text. I still can't believe that he's left forever...its like he'd turn up someday and call...his usual. I suppose it will be like that for a long time to come. some people think I am banking on the misery as a muse...I beg to differ. I am all out of poetry. Hardly write nowadays except for NoPoo.
Anyway, thank you so much for being here. Appreciate you very much. Hugs.
Anyway, thank you so much for being here. Appreciate you very much. Hugs.
Anonymous
19th Jun 2021 11:48am
You are so so welcome, Grace...
Your feelings are 100% just and I fully empathize... It takes as long as it takes,Period ...It's different for everyone.....I relate to your feelings of thinking he's just around the corner, via whatever communication..... That's normal.... Focus on yourself and let those other people think whatever they want....You know your own truth.... You WILL feel less pain and anguish, in time... I promise you that...it will just happen gradually...Until you're just a different version of you....Less burdened but never really the same.... and that is ok.... You do your best day to day... that's all you can do.... As far a poetry....I believe It will ebb and flow... your poetry, that is .... I fully believe that Gabe would want you to continue to create but in your own time.... and #Nopoo keeps the ember lit....Imo.
You really do lay down some extreme exquisite poems there... I always look forward to them.
Be well,
I'm thinking of you and you hang in there!
🌹 - hugs
-B
Your feelings are 100% just and I fully empathize... It takes as long as it takes,Period ...It's different for everyone.....I relate to your feelings of thinking he's just around the corner, via whatever communication..... That's normal.... Focus on yourself and let those other people think whatever they want....You know your own truth.... You WILL feel less pain and anguish, in time... I promise you that...it will just happen gradually...Until you're just a different version of you....Less burdened but never really the same.... and that is ok.... You do your best day to day... that's all you can do.... As far a poetry....I believe It will ebb and flow... your poetry, that is .... I fully believe that Gabe would want you to continue to create but in your own time.... and #Nopoo keeps the ember lit....Imo.
You really do lay down some extreme exquisite poems there... I always look forward to them.
Be well,
I'm thinking of you and you hang in there!
🌹 - hugs
-B
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25th Jun 2021 3:41am
It's always a little sad to read of someone's loss. I did enjoy reading your poem and hope that maybe you left some of your sadness in these words and out of your thoughts, even if just for a little.
25th Jun 2021 8:46am
Thank you so much for reading. You are right. I suppose its a way to write out the sadness. Thanks for being here, Ljdynamic.
