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Battle Ax Poem By Adagio (Production By SKC)
Hauntings of my shadows
brings back memories
of my obituary
etched in tallow
like a candle in the wind
dripping sorrows
of my sins, whispering...
God! blade the Queen
Of remission and stagnation
and eternal damnation’s new rein
in shafts of remindful lavatories
behind shadowing’s of tearaway’s tears
a lonely candle of talon flame
veiled in darken widower weeds
wed to the hourglass of dusk
Inglorious to the sweetness of the wine
of which I bring shame
and eternal damnation’s new rein
dripping poetic battle-ax acorn
tethering dredgers for starlings
playing horsemen to twilight
listening to the dark night falling
from the pantry of my larder
dripping poetic battle ax acorn
Mini-Production Brought To You
By
Another K Production
Poetic Words Of Inspiration
By
Poet Adagio
brings back memories
of my obituary
etched in tallow
like a candle in the wind
dripping sorrows
of my sins, whispering...
God! blade the Queen
Of remission and stagnation
and eternal damnation’s new rein
in shafts of remindful lavatories
behind shadowing’s of tearaway’s tears
a lonely candle of talon flame
veiled in darken widower weeds
wed to the hourglass of dusk
Inglorious to the sweetness of the wine
of which I bring shame
and eternal damnation’s new rein
dripping poetic battle-ax acorn
tethering dredgers for starlings
playing horsemen to twilight
listening to the dark night falling
from the pantry of my larder
dripping poetic battle ax acorn
Mini-Production Brought To You
By
Another K Production
Poetic Words Of Inspiration
By
Poet Adagio
Published 18th Jun 2021
Author's Note
I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.
Edgar Allan Poe
Edgar Allan Poe
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18th Jun 2021 3:44am
18th Jun 2021 3:47am
18th Jun 2021 1:20pm
Yowzah ... I do so love your mind my Dark Knight, and to creep into it to lay the foundation of my horror/thriller vision... is an all time honor within itself.. I did love the liberties of your words and the elements of the darker forces to utilize when making this production
Thank you, sincerely for allowing me to represent your beautiful mindcraft in all is vividness...
We must do lunch.. You may post your production anywhere it is on my Youtube Channel and your words are copyrighted..
Thank you, sincerely for allowing me to represent your beautiful mindcraft in all is vividness...
We must do lunch.. You may post your production anywhere it is on my Youtube Channel and your words are copyrighted..
18th Jun 2021 1:21pm
Well good morning to you my friend.. and you are starting me out with a aww..and an ooo thank you for taking the time to listen, and read my mini-production and found comfort in my vision to tell me very nicely done
I have to give credit where it lies the most, and that is Adagio's faith in me, for trusting me with his poetic words to incorporate my vision to produce, Battle Ax.. I love the horror of it all
Have a beautiful Friday and all the blessings that goes into the day before the start of the weekend my friend
I have to give credit where it lies the most, and that is Adagio's faith in me, for trusting me with his poetic words to incorporate my vision to produce, Battle Ax.. I love the horror of it all
Have a beautiful Friday and all the blessings that goes into the day before the start of the weekend my friend
18th Jun 2021 3:44am
Oh my! If my insanity was this well-worn, I would never see the light of day. SKC makes me proud of my dark proclivities.
18th Jun 2021 2:35pm
Oh.. you have done me proud in upholding your vision.. I am just the Conductor and you are the symphony, and we make beautiful music together..
This moment felt like old times when be brought our poetic musings together ..if I must confess.. look how far we've have evolved... wink
On that notoriety and a Champagne toast to our success, I wish you a fantastic Friday and a blasting weekend my Dark Knight.. you are worthy of it, always
This moment felt like old times when be brought our poetic musings together ..if I must confess.. look how far we've have evolved... wink
On that notoriety and a Champagne toast to our success, I wish you a fantastic Friday and a blasting weekend my Dark Knight.. you are worthy of it, always
You have brought me into the darkness with you my Erotic Queen of Love, we will fight together. Keep on writing both of you.
18th Jun 2021 1:36pm
Thank you, no moves me more than your poetic blessings and admiration my handsome poet.. I will bow to your accolade, they are a dime a dozen..
If I had a rose to give you, you know I would, if I had the world to give you, with the Creator's assurance, I would.. so I can only give you my words of comfort and a virtual hug for the support...
I lay out the red carpet for you as you walk all over this Friday and please have a safe and fulfilling weekend my handsome poet
If I had a rose to give you, you know I would, if I had the world to give you, with the Creator's assurance, I would.. so I can only give you my words of comfort and a virtual hug for the support...
I lay out the red carpet for you as you walk all over this Friday and please have a safe and fulfilling weekend my handsome poet
19th Jun 2021 6:27am
I will have a safe weekend if you walk the red carpet with me my Erotic Queen of Love.
20th Jun 2021 3:19am
20th Jun 2021 5:51am
I will be honored that you are there with me my Erotic Queen of Love. Because you are dressed in a very beautiful dress that makes glisten.
20th Jun 2021 6:20pm
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22nd Jun 2021 6:17am
18th Jun 2021 5:40am
Another stellar production...
And you know I'm a sucker for the k production...
Though just on the spirit of friendly feedback....
The voice feels forced to sound morbid and at times it feels as if the poem is being read not recited
But either way still awesome
And you know I'm a sucker for the k production...
Though just on the spirit of friendly feedback....
The voice feels forced to sound morbid and at times it feels as if the poem is being read not recited
But either way still awesome
18th Jun 2021 2:34pm
‘The voice feels forced to sound morbid and at times it feels as if the poem is being read not recited’
My King, the poem is being read from the poetic gift of the poet. In addition, it would take me an entire summary to go into the specifics of slice producing, alignment producing, and techno producing to synchronizing producing any of my mini-productions.
Therefore, close your eyes to listen to the rhythm of the production in harmony, minus the words…That is what I have to do when adding any special effects, dialogue, or music when it pertains to editing the footage, therefore, it goes perfect with each byline and scene
It's me, brought to you by SKC. I am so thrilled in my dark showing.
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Oh my! If my insanity was this well-worn, I would never see the light of day. SKC makes me proud of my dark proclivities..... unquote,
That is all the praise I will ever need, meaning, my work has been well received in merit and I am quite satisfied with that. And then to sell my productions on the Dark Web, simply priceless
Mm.. thank you my King, for taking the necessary time to listen, watch, and read, and providing an encore comment. Please enjoy your Friday and the weather in South Africa as you march into a super duper weekend ... I will visit your musing as time allows...
My King, the poem is being read from the poetic gift of the poet. In addition, it would take me an entire summary to go into the specifics of slice producing, alignment producing, and techno producing to synchronizing producing any of my mini-productions.
Therefore, close your eyes to listen to the rhythm of the production in harmony, minus the words…That is what I have to do when adding any special effects, dialogue, or music when it pertains to editing the footage, therefore, it goes perfect with each byline and scene
It's me, brought to you by SKC. I am so thrilled in my dark showing.
-And-
Oh my! If my insanity was this well-worn, I would never see the light of day. SKC makes me proud of my dark proclivities..... unquote,
That is all the praise I will ever need, meaning, my work has been well received in merit and I am quite satisfied with that. And then to sell my productions on the Dark Web, simply priceless
Mm.. thank you my King, for taking the necessary time to listen, watch, and read, and providing an encore comment. Please enjoy your Friday and the weather in South Africa as you march into a super duper weekend ... I will visit your musing as time allows...
