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On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56

Hanging on a string
Lonely swinging waiting heart
Indescribable ache living inside
Feelings say its no sunday thing
More an everyday all night long sensation

Dangling over the abyss
Where surrender breathes
Sending electrical shivers
Delightful jolts through senses
Giving that awareness of life

Love's madness keeps seeping
Yearnings biting hard
Forever burning
Fire rushes
Forever connecting
Forever connecting
Mirroring one another
Conjoined pain attracts,
such poignant souls adhere

Being untied of one,
entwined to swing in dual
To be exactly, every single day
hope filled together, per fate's allow

Madness morphs to fools in love
Conquering the deepest abyss
Even the smallest glimmer of light
shall wholly destroy shared darkness

Pure, honest hearts meld
Loneliness is but a whispered memory
The ache of once yearned for
becomes the pulsing need of joy
and simple happiness

Unified in mind
and branded upon


Written by Bluevelvete
Author's Note
My thanks to @AspergerPoet56 for the inspiration here and for teaching me how poetry is really supposed to be written.
All my gratitude, C - 💙
My thanks to @AspergerPoet56 for the inspiration here and for teaching me how poetry is really supposed to be written.
All my gratitude, C - 💙

This is a shout out to the game we'd play where we'd take the last line of a haiku or senryś that was posted and use that as the first line of your own haiku or senryś.....and go back and forth that way with whoever was playing.. via the erotica forum. I definitely miss those who helped make it spicy fun. Well wishes sent out to them all....✨ 💫 ✨

©Colin Weir
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