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Perfectly Perfect you
You're self righteousness suits you in every way I say
Yes the goodness and the uprightness and the decency - Always the card you play!
Dipped in virtue and morality yes your perfectly perfect.
And the saintliness and the nobility the oozes from you?!
Much respect!
Yes the goodness and the uprightness and the decency - Always the card you play!
Dipped in virtue and morality yes your perfectly perfect.
And the saintliness and the nobility the oozes from you?!
Much respect!
Published 15th Jun 2021
Author's Note
You know my name but not my story
You see my smile but not my pain
You notice my cuts but not my scars
You can read my lips but not my mind!
You see my smile but not my pain
You notice my cuts but not my scars
You can read my lips but not my mind!
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15th Jun 2021 4:29pm
No bodies perfect but being honest, caring and virtuous are good traits. But that doesn't make you better than anyone else or blind to others pains
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
15th Jun 2021 8:32pm
Quite The Contradiction
Perfection combined with the middle finger
That's like a body blow to the abdomen
All that's left is that uppercut and a hook
Incredible
"If you look for perfection, you'll never be content.”
- Leo Tolstoy
Perfection combined with the middle finger
That's like a body blow to the abdomen
All that's left is that uppercut and a hook
Incredible
"If you look for perfection, you'll never be content.”
- Leo Tolstoy
16th Jun 2021 7:40am
15th Jun 2021 9:43pm
This piece is tight we took it as you was being sarcastic, the author notes are even tighter.
16th Jun 2021 7:39am
Thank you sir I'm trying to use nicer words to express my feelings... I think it's working... I kinda like being this nice👌🤭😁
16th Jun 2021 7:40am
16th Jun 2021 7:43am
yes you inspired me...(Cravens For the Raven) I loved that. Thanks queen!💋
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