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Perhaps a Metaphor
A cut
Abrasion on the side
Middle finger
Skin torn
No bleed
Just raw
Hurts doing certain things
Will heal relatively fast
Perhaps a metaphor for life
Something to remind me
Be kind
Listen
Don't solve
Abrasion on the side
Middle finger
Skin torn
No bleed
Just raw
Hurts doing certain things
Will heal relatively fast
Perhaps a metaphor for life
Something to remind me
Be kind
Listen
Don't solve
Author's Note
Had a dumb argument with my wife yesterday. We rarely argue.
It passed, then the cut. Made me think ...
It passed, then the cut. Made me think ...
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Re. Perhaps a Metaphor
13th Jun 2021 1:08pm
There are life lessons everywhere, if we open our eyes... this is a good one!
Nice poeting. 🙂
xx
Nice poeting. 🙂
xx
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13th Jun 2021 1:18pm
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13th Jun 2021 1:47pm
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13th Jun 2021 1:48pm
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13th Jun 2021 1:49pm
Re. Perhaps a Metaphor
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Jun 2021 4:42pm
13th Jun 2021 4:41pm
I will keep that in mind, thank you. It's good advice I needed to read.
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Re. Perhaps a Metaphor
Anonymous
13th Jun 2021 10:18pm
Wow, love this!!
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Re: Re. Perhaps a Metaphor
13th Jun 2021 11:22pm
Re. Perhaps a Metaphor
14th Jun 2021 5:29am
Dear PS,
Could very well be a metaphor or it could be your “what for” for arguing with Mrs. P. Well, let this be a lesson to you.😉
(And I totally dig how you turned it around to see sense and listen NOT solve.) 😊
That’s a HUGE LIKE in my book!
H🌷
Could very well be a metaphor or it could be your “what for” for arguing with Mrs. P. Well, let this be a lesson to you.😉
(And I totally dig how you turned it around to see sense and listen NOT solve.) 😊
That’s a HUGE LIKE in my book!
H🌷
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Re: Re. Perhaps a Metaphor
14th Jun 2021 11:28am
This Abrasion has a lot of connection to some here.
We hardly ever argue but when we do it's quick and surgical in nature. She really pissed me off. She was wrong but that doesn't matter. We both got in a few blows in and both made a few changes.
Mission accomplished.
Thx H
Glad it had meaning for you
We hardly ever argue but when we do it's quick and surgical in nature. She really pissed me off. She was wrong but that doesn't matter. We both got in a few blows in and both made a few changes.
Mission accomplished.
Thx H
Glad it had meaning for you
Re. Perhaps a Metaphor
19th Jul 2021 2:44am
Great metaphor, it's really interesting that after an argument we are able to re-gather thoughts and see things or reflect in a different manner.
Nice write sir.
Nice write sir.
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Re: Re. Perhaps a Metaphor
19th Jul 2021 3:38am
We don’t argue often but when we do it’s a blow out
I make her laugh usually by mooning her
Argument over
I make her laugh usually by mooning her
Argument over