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Hands
Author's Note
Well... A good friend of mine was communicating some things to me and this write appeared, at some point after... Seeing things with spiral eyes...
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Anonymous
- Edited 29th Jan 2022 7:45am
9th Jun 2021 12:13pm
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Re: Re. Hands
10th Jun 2021 5:16am
Re. Hands
9th Jun 2021 5:31pm
A man's hands are the first thing I look at. They tell so much about him.
You really made this visual work with the poem. Well done for that. The poem itself is very enlightening as to glimpses of your life, i.e. - your grandmother reading palms, and especially your perspective of spiral eyes and what you had endured for being different. It's something most can relate to, as each person seems to have something that others picked at.
I enjoyed both the visual and the words immensely.
You really made this visual work with the poem. Well done for that. The poem itself is very enlightening as to glimpses of your life, i.e. - your grandmother reading palms, and especially your perspective of spiral eyes and what you had endured for being different. It's something most can relate to, as each person seems to have something that others picked at.
I enjoyed both the visual and the words immensely.
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Re: Re. Hands
10th Jun 2021 5:19am
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Very interesting. Thank you for that insight and addition to my thought process.
I am very appreciative to have connected to you in this way.
Very interesting. Thank you for that insight and addition to my thought process.
I am very appreciative to have connected to you in this way.
Re. Hands
10th Jun 2021 5:45am
This is a beautiful write..
A lot of self acceptance ..
Yet I have to say, something is not quiet right here🤔
I can hardly read everything it could be the font or the background image.....
Still an intrigue though
A lot of self acceptance ..
Yet I have to say, something is not quiet right here🤔
I can hardly read everything it could be the font or the background image.....
Still an intrigue though
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Re: Re. Hands
10th Jun 2021 6:31am
Thank you POT. That is very cool.
Yes... I was going for something like Punk Rock/Grafitti/The Poetry of Everywhere... with layers?
and like how we can mix mediums...
Something I think of as a: multiplicity of mediums.
Id really like to advance in this regard... into the mediums.
I like your insights tremendously. :)
Yes... I was going for something like Punk Rock/Grafitti/The Poetry of Everywhere... with layers?
and like how we can mix mediums...
Something I think of as a: multiplicity of mediums.
Id really like to advance in this regard... into the mediums.
I like your insights tremendously. :)
Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Apr 2022 3:45am
10th Jun 2021 6:15am
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Re: Re. Hands
10th Jun 2021 6:43am