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SHORT SONG WRITTEN IN THE BATHTUB
You make me feel like hot shit
And you’re a fly
You see me and you smile
I don’t know why
I’m so used to existing
In self-critique
Being with you I feel strong
Instead of meek
You make me feel like water
To a thirsty cat
Lapping me up I am blessed
What’s up with that
I’m so used to existing
In self-critique
Being with you I feel strong
Instead of meek
Being with you I feel strong
Instead of meek
Being with you I feel strong
Instead of meek
And you’re a fly
You see me and you smile
I don’t know why
I’m so used to existing
In self-critique
Being with you I feel strong
Instead of meek
You make me feel like water
To a thirsty cat
Lapping me up I am blessed
What’s up with that
I’m so used to existing
In self-critique
Being with you I feel strong
Instead of meek
Being with you I feel strong
Instead of meek
Being with you I feel strong
Instead of meek
Published 9th Jun 2021
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9th Jun 2021 5:59pm
9th Jun 2021 6:16pm
I was singing it but yeah, I should slap some bass on it and hand vocal/ukulele duties to my lady! Thanks!
