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Savages
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Savages
Living in jungles
Seen as uncivilized beast
Summer's prey and feast
Written by
da_poetic-edifier
(Damon)
Published
8th Jun 2021
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Author's Note
My first attempt at writing a haiku.
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#haiku
#LifeStruggles
#poverty
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- Edited 10th Jul 2021 8:45pm
8th Jun 2021 11:56pm
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da_poetic-edifier
(Damon)
9th Jun 2021 1:04am
Thank you.
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CherryLoveNotes
9th Jun 2021 2:28am
You have done a marvelous job, sir
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da_poetic-edifier
(Damon)
9th Jun 2021 5:12am
Thank you.
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FATBOY300PLUS
9th Jun 2021 4:20am
Savages indeed
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I_IS_ME
9th Jun 2021 6:03am
Congrats dude we tried several times and gave up. But we enjoyed this one dude, tight work
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da_poetic-edifier
(Damon)
9th Jun 2021 11:53am
Thanks bro. Decided to try my hand at something different. Not really my cup of tea so I won't be doing many of these. Appreciate the feedback.
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Cipher_O
(WarlordoftheWrittenWord)
11th Jun 2021 12:09pm
Savage for shore. Nicely written.
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wallyroo92
16th Jul 2021 2:26pm
And a good one at that. Although limited in choice of words, they always give a wisdom and mystery.
Nicely done sir
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