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bird music
a rhymed, mirrored octet
bird
music
to my ear
paints the morning
with orchestral b l i s s.
clarinet a n d f l u t e songs
fill m y s o l i t u d e with glee;
robin, blue jay, mockingbird, thrush
blend new arias with the windrush
for m y d e e p e s t r e v e r i e,
mirth for which my heart longs.
what c o u l d go amiss?
ne'er such thrilling
sweet and clear
r u b r i c
heard.
© Copyright 2021 June 04
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
bird
music
to my ear
paints the morning
with orchestral b l i s s.
clarinet a n d f l u t e songs
fill m y s o l i t u d e with glee;
robin, blue jay, mockingbird, thrush
blend new arias with the windrush
for m y d e e p e s t r e v e r i e,
mirth for which my heart longs.
what c o u l d go amiss?
ne'er such thrilling
sweet and clear
r u b r i c
heard.
© Copyright 2021 June 04
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
Published 6th Jun 2021
Author's Note
View visual: http://mydo.cx/ZGI2NjU2
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6th Jun 2021 7:36pm
7th Jun 2021 2:40am
Thank you, Ahavati.
I did not think of a raindrop, although I had some kind of orb in mind. I really like the "concrete" possibilities of this type of poetry.
Thanks for the R/L add.
Sincerely
cab
I did not think of a raindrop, although I had some kind of orb in mind. I really like the "concrete" possibilities of this type of poetry.
Thanks for the R/L add.
Sincerely
cab
7th Jun 2021 11:47pm
When I hear this from someone with as searching a mind as yours, I am quite pleased, Ljd.
Thank you
Would you mind going back to the one you created a few weeks ago? What I will ask you to do is centre it on the page. You will then see how very much like this ti turns out.
What I do, as well, is insert extra spacebar spaces to allow the corresponding rhyming lines to balance out visually.
Thanks for the R/L honour.
Sincerely
cab
PS I have been wondering about your apparent disappearance from these pages. Good to see you again.
Thank you
Would you mind going back to the one you created a few weeks ago? What I will ask you to do is centre it on the page. You will then see how very much like this ti turns out.
What I do, as well, is insert extra spacebar spaces to allow the corresponding rhyming lines to balance out visually.
Thanks for the R/L honour.
Sincerely
cab
PS I have been wondering about your apparent disappearance from these pages. Good to see you again.
12th Oct 2021 4:45pm
Oh how beautiful. I felt like I could hear and see the birds even though I am in front of a computer. :) Both visuals are gorgeous as always. I also felt the lower one seemed like a rain drop or dew drop.
