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A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
Waiting for the sun
to come out and play
gathering my strength
to fight through the day
My dark super hero,
right at my side
whose energy I siphon,
fueling my stride
A knowing smile slowly curls
the corners of my mouth
as blood begins pumping
from north and then south
Black dispositions lighten,
along with the dawn
my savior's prepared me,
the game is now on
As the sky dances with beauty
the colorful playtime a delight
I softly cradle my coffee
My loyalest companion of might.
Author's Note
©Blu2021
Just a little light fun with rhyming and my longest most loyal love.
Cheers! ☕*tink*☕
Just a little light fun with rhyming and my longest most loyal love.
Cheers! ☕*tink*☕
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Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
3rd Jun 2021 5:10pm
Sunrise is the best time of day, especially when shared with a loyal friend.
Ahh coffee. Loyal...warm...invigorating.
Lovely poem.
🙏🏼
Ahh coffee. Loyal...warm...invigorating.
Lovely poem.
🙏🏼
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Re: Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
3rd Jun 2021 8:10pm
Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
3rd Jun 2021 5:21pm
Re: Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
3rd Jun 2021 8:12pm
lol... Yes we certainly have a symbiotic relationship.... hahaha... Ty for the kind words, Lj, appreciate your time and leaving your thoughts.
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹-💙
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹-💙
Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
3rd Jun 2021 5:45pm
All hail a cup of Joe lol
Great write beautiful, coffee the fuel of poets
Love and light
Ron xx
Great write beautiful, coffee the fuel of poets
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
3rd Jun 2021 8:13pm
Exactly!!
✨ ☕ ✨
Thanks for the lovely words and the generous list add.
I'm appreciative 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
✨ ☕ ✨
Thanks for the lovely words and the generous list add.
I'm appreciative 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
3rd Jun 2021 7:36pm
Re: Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
3rd Jun 2021 8:10pm
Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
3rd Jun 2021 7:37pm
Watching the sunrise is a beautiful thing. I wish I wish I could watch the sunrise with you, LOL. Keep on writing you strong smart beautiful sexy woman.
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Re: Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
3rd Jun 2021 8:14pm
lol... a picture is the second best way... enjoy! Thanks, Francisco. I appreciate you reading and leaving kind words for me.
🌹
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Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
3rd Jun 2021 8:11pm
Re: Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
3rd Jun 2021 8:16pm
Then my work is done, in full... for the day....I am giggling that you liked it.... I often write my odes to coffee so I'm sure there'll be another!
Yes!!! ☕!
Ty for reading and your comments
🌹-💙
B
Yes!!! ☕!
Ty for reading and your comments
🌹-💙
B
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3rd Jun 2021 8:15pm
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Re: Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
3rd Jun 2021 8:21pm
Just a little light fun and my usual declared love.... lol.... It's definitely something acquired, coffee drinking ... I think people either adore it or can't be bothered... hahaha... It's addictive that's for sure. I do love tea as well but in it's place, like afternoons or over the weekends... definitely not as an eye opener!! hahaha 😂 I get That smell factor though.... I used to feel that way as a kid.
I like the Bia drinks too! They're definitely yummy and boost worthy!
Thanks for reading and your comments, Tim
I'm appreciative of your visits 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
I like the Bia drinks too! They're definitely yummy and boost worthy!
Thanks for reading and your comments, Tim
I'm appreciative of your visits 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
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3rd Jun 2021 8:23pm
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Re: Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
Green tea is my go to!!!
If you want an experience that's truly yummy and you really really want to treat yourself... (it's pricey)
try Manuka honey... it's available online or if you have a Whole Foods.... it's from New Zealand, it's rare which is why it's pricey but it's definitely worth trying, if honey is something you enjoy. I use it a lot instead of sugar so I treat myself every so often.... it's healing properties are supposed to be more beneficial but that's a little bit subjective online too... I like it's taste!
Horror movies on YouTube?!?! Anything good? I am extremely excited about The new Conjuring movie coming out!! YES!!!
If you want an experience that's truly yummy and you really really want to treat yourself... (it's pricey)
try Manuka honey... it's available online or if you have a Whole Foods.... it's from New Zealand, it's rare which is why it's pricey but it's definitely worth trying, if honey is something you enjoy. I use it a lot instead of sugar so I treat myself every so often.... it's healing properties are supposed to be more beneficial but that's a little bit subjective online too... I like it's taste!
Horror movies on YouTube?!?! Anything good? I am extremely excited about The new Conjuring movie coming out!! YES!!!
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Re: Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
3rd Jun 2021 8:58pm
Good to know... I'll have to check them out... I'm addicted to the Shudder app and watch a bunch of decent to horrible (ha!) horror movies from there!
You'd probably like it, if you haven't already checked it out :)
You'd probably like it, if you haven't already checked it out :)
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3rd Jun 2021 8:59pm
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Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
3rd Jun 2021 8:51pm
Re: Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
3rd Jun 2021 8:56pm
There he is!! My sweet friend 🙏🏻... I've missed your presence and I hope you're feeling well these days or at least on an even keel... it's a joy and huge smile inducer to read your comments... Coffee and the sunrise is like medicine for me...I don't know how I'd survive without either, really. Soothing... even on days where I am certain that's not possible, it is for those few moments...how lucky!
I thank you for reading and the generous list add here and on so many other pieces, you're a lovely soul, A.
It's always a pleasure ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
I thank you for reading and the generous list add here and on so many other pieces, you're a lovely soul, A.
It's always a pleasure ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
3rd Jun 2021 9:18pm
You had me at the title ... great flowing ... well perked tribute ... bravo B ... please pass the cream ...
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Re: Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
3rd Jun 2021 9:20pm
Lol.. absolutely!!
☕ Cheers ☕!!
Thanks, LilD.
Knew you'd be there in agreement!
Appreciate the list add, too
🌹-B
☕ Cheers ☕!!
Thanks, LilD.
Knew you'd be there in agreement!
Appreciate the list add, too
🌹-B
Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
3rd Jun 2021 11:01pm
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3rd Jun 2021 11:03pm
Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
4th Jun 2021 00:12am
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4th Jun 2021 00:15am
Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
4th Jun 2021 10:58am
Re: Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
Hey Aaron!
It's been a while! .... So lovely to hear from you and see you on my page... Thanks for the lovely sentiments and the generous list add..
I'll definitely stop by. (I've been meaning to!) because I've always enjoyed where your poems take me, even if I haven't understood fully; as you're way way WAY smarter than I am. I do read a lot of what you write, I just feel desperately inadequate to comment....;)
.. but I digress.... hahaha...
I am all smiles to have you take the time to leave your thoughts with me, now.
I appreciate it and I'm glad you enjoyed reading.
Much love and respect your way ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹-💙
B
It's been a while! .... So lovely to hear from you and see you on my page... Thanks for the lovely sentiments and the generous list add..
I'll definitely stop by. (I've been meaning to!) because I've always enjoyed where your poems take me, even if I haven't understood fully; as you're way way WAY smarter than I am. I do read a lot of what you write, I just feel desperately inadequate to comment....;)
.. but I digress.... hahaha...
I am all smiles to have you take the time to leave your thoughts with me, now.
I appreciate it and I'm glad you enjoyed reading.
Much love and respect your way ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹-💙
B
Re: Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
4th Jun 2021 7:53pm
Hey :) I am on a reading spree today. <3
Well, it's not really that I am smarter, but I usually write about either Tolkien, which requires having read at least the Silmarilion, or I add references to specific knowledge with limited access that I've recently read about in my spiritual books... I know, it's a bit of an issue, because I am the only one that can properly decipher them XD I've been planning to write in a less 'narrow' way but usually my muse takes me to the last place that influenced my mood... and I get that mostly from literature, philosophy, art. I am glad that they provoke a nice feeling, in every case :)
Well, it's not really that I am smarter, but I usually write about either Tolkien, which requires having read at least the Silmarilion, or I add references to specific knowledge with limited access that I've recently read about in my spiritual books... I know, it's a bit of an issue, because I am the only one that can properly decipher them XD I've been planning to write in a less 'narrow' way but usually my muse takes me to the last place that influenced my mood... and I get that mostly from literature, philosophy, art. I am glad that they provoke a nice feeling, in every case :)
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Re: Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
4th Jun 2021 8:18pm
You're intelligence is a draw, never a minus... it's more a reflection of my own lack of brain power, was my intention in mentioning... haha...
I do very much enjoy your conveyance of emotions, indeed!
🌹-💙
I do very much enjoy your conveyance of emotions, indeed!
🌹-💙
Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
12th Jun 2021 4:12am
As a brotherly connoisseur in the brew, I can vouch for the magic you have playfully unfurled with this wonderful poem. This has to be the most playful and delightful poem on morning coffee I've come across. I go to the coffee shop almost every day and know the delight you speak of. There is nothing that can replace the taste of coffee at sunrise.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
13th Jul 2021 8:39pm
The perfect combination of coffee and a sunrise, fueling positive thoughts for a productive day.
Great rhyme and flow Blue!
Great rhyme and flow Blue!
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13th Jul 2021 10:02pm
Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
Anonymous
16th Mar 2023 1:11pm
This put a smile on my face!
Love the allegory...and the style switch up
Very clever B...
Cheers
Love the allegory...and the style switch up
Very clever B...
Cheers
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Re: Re. A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
Coffee is my first true love, methinks.. One of them, anyway... ;)
I'm delighted to have put a smile on your face this morning, Naaj.. Sometimes a little cup of Joe and some small bits of rhyme is all you need to forge a day ahead!
Thank you for taking the time...
It's always a lovely pleasure,
🌹💙☕
xo
I'm delighted to have put a smile on your face this morning, Naaj.. Sometimes a little cup of Joe and some small bits of rhyme is all you need to forge a day ahead!
Thank you for taking the time...
It's always a lovely pleasure,
🌹💙☕
xo