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UNANSWERED QUESTIONS
If you could reach across the void, would your hand meet mine, would I be the one you'd pick, to share your precious time
if I were to reach within your soul
would you open the closed pages
so I can read your hearts journey
If you could wrap yourself around me, would your embrace be so tight, would I be the lucky one, you've chosen on this night
if I stood before you hiding nothing
naked in body, mind, heart & soul
would you walk away or stay
Would you lay your head on my chest, our fingers mingled into one, an evening shared across the void, until the night is done
if I was to look into your eyes
would you see my soul in mine
or just breathe deeply as I cry
If you could see into my soul, reach in and find my heart, would you share such a special gift, until we had to part
If I was to confess all my desires
secretly whispering while you slumber
would your spirit rise kissing mine
Would I be the chosen one, the man who shares your dreams, would I be your special man, the one you want it seems
if I captured a falling star
and we both wished upon it
would you wish the same as I
Or is there someone else, who wanders through your dreams and heart and I'm just wishing on a falling star, destined to crash apart
if I were to tiptoe secretly among shadows
hoping that another is just an illusion
would you feel my presence peeking
I guess these things I'll never know, only you can seal my fate, will I be your chosen dream lover, or just your poet mate
Ron and Flowergirl
if I were to reach within your soul
would you open the closed pages
so I can read your hearts journey
If you could wrap yourself around me, would your embrace be so tight, would I be the lucky one, you've chosen on this night
if I stood before you hiding nothing
naked in body, mind, heart & soul
would you walk away or stay
Would you lay your head on my chest, our fingers mingled into one, an evening shared across the void, until the night is done
if I was to look into your eyes
would you see my soul in mine
or just breathe deeply as I cry
If you could see into my soul, reach in and find my heart, would you share such a special gift, until we had to part
If I was to confess all my desires
secretly whispering while you slumber
would your spirit rise kissing mine
Would I be the chosen one, the man who shares your dreams, would I be your special man, the one you want it seems
if I captured a falling star
and we both wished upon it
would you wish the same as I
Or is there someone else, who wanders through your dreams and heart and I'm just wishing on a falling star, destined to crash apart
if I were to tiptoe secretly among shadows
hoping that another is just an illusion
would you feel my presence peeking
I guess these things I'll never know, only you can seal my fate, will I be your chosen dream lover, or just your poet mate
Ron and Flowergirl
Author's Note
My words were inspired from Ron’s ink “If You Could Reach”……if you haven’t read it yet……it’s a must…..beautiful!!!
Thank you Ron for the great honor of sharing ink with you……you’re a fantastic writer and an amazing soul 🌸💜
Thank you Ron for the great honor of sharing ink with you……you’re a fantastic writer and an amazing soul 🌸💜
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Re. UNANSWERED QUESTIONS
2nd Jun 2021 3:16pm
Just absolutely delight to share a page with you
It was awesome and I couldn't be more delighted with the outcome
Thank you
Love and light
Ron xx
It was awesome and I couldn't be more delighted with the outcome
Thank you
Love and light
Ron xx
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2nd Jun 2021 3:18pm
Awe Ron…….the honor is all mine to have shared ink with you…….it felt magical…….thank you again my precious friend…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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2nd Jun 2021 6:57pm
You make your fate, if what that person then go after what you want. Keep on writing.
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4th Jun 2021 1:19am
Hey Phantom…….you’re a very wise soul…….you always leave a thought proving comment…….thank you for smiling upon my ink……purple luv & hugs xo :)
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4th Jun 2021 6:53am
Of course I'm your wise soul who wants you to smile while ypur heart melt like butter. You also need to enjoy orgasmic bliss.
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2nd Jun 2021 7:00pm
I was so impressed with this new form, PurpledOne! It's always nice to see two poets collaborating!
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4th Jun 2021 1:26am
Hey Avahati…….I was so inspired by Ron’s ink “If You Could Reach”…..I left most of I wrote here as a comment…….I couldn’t resist sharing ink with such a talent…….it gave me encouragement……I’m glad you liked this…….thank you…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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3rd Jun 2021 2:31pm
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4th Jun 2021 1:28am
Hey TIG…….great to see you…….Ron is an awesome talent & soul……I really enjoyed sharing ink with him…….thank you for surprising me with a visit……made me smile…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2021 1:33am
What an amazing collaboration!! Some of the best that I've read here in DUP... It was kismet... and seamless, perfectly complementing each other! I was captivated!
Thank you for sharing your joint talents conjoined, astound!!
🌹-💙
xo
B
Thank you for sharing your joint talents conjoined, astound!!
🌹-💙
xo
B
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4th Jun 2021 2:16am
Hey Blue…….thank you for your encouraging comment…….Ron is an amazing talent and soul……he made it easy……..you touched my heart very much with your words……..thank you again…….honored by the RL……purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Hey Tim…….thrilled you’ve enjoyed our ink……Ron is so easy to write with…….thank you for visiting…..honored by the RL..…purple luv & hugs xo :)
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6th Jun 2021 2:50am
Dear FG,
Lovely. The both of you in harmony. This poem made me think if I’d met my mate now would we pick each other for a second time around? A lot to consider from some very reflective thoughts throughout this write. Congratulations on such an inspirational piece. Well done. H🌷
Lovely. The both of you in harmony. This poem made me think if I’d met my mate now would we pick each other for a second time around? A lot to consider from some very reflective thoughts throughout this write. Congratulations on such an inspirational piece. Well done. H🌷
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6th Jun 2021 4:15pm
Hey H…….always a thrill to see you smiling upon our ink……you’re such an encourager…….Ron is an amazing talent and soul……his words were so inspiring…….happy our ink was so inspiring…….I’ve wonder myself about what it might be like if certain souls came back in my life…….can luv ever come back the same as was or stronger…….thank you…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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13th Jun 2021 10:17pm
to many time I have seen lady's giving up their purity that amazing beautiful flower. to many girls fall for a handsome coward looking for his next prey to devour leaving her with scars that the one that flower was meant to deal with to rebuild her self-esteem for her to the woman she was meant to be. so beautiful word you wrote questions they can invoke just find the answer before you leap
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Hey 411……tears came to me when I read your response a bit ago…….you sound as if you’re a soul who knows me…….who feels within my words…….thank you for a thought provoking comment…….glad you felt within our words……purple luv & hugs xo :)
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20th Jun 2021 2:19am
the lady I speak you see is my wife of 38 years she didn't see the damage. yet she loved me , she could be in love with me because of a predator in her teens that made it where she couldn't open her heart to me. it took 25 year a lot of fight a lot more tears. now she has that love beyond and above my dreams of how it would have been in the beginning. i us my poetry for two thing my love for her and to teach purity not from just a Christian view but the damage that promiscuity can do.
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22nd Jun 2021 2:08am
Thank you 411 for sharing your personal story with me……..I understand completely……..congratulations on the many years…….you’re both amazing souls to have experienced a luv together that some are still waiting to find…….appreciate you for honesty and your talent…….purple luv & hugs 🌸