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What I see
I can't help but watch you sometimes
I see you and I have to stare
You may be hanging out the washing doing the dishes or just sitting there
I see you there in your stance
And I feel myself go into a trance
There's nothing more in this world than when I see
You saying I love you back to me
And their is nothing so sweet
As the joy I feel when I watch you sleep
If the world could see what I see
Then everyone would feel the same as me
And I can't explain why
Just looking at you gets me so high
I see you and I have to stare
You may be hanging out the washing doing the dishes or just sitting there
I see you there in your stance
And I feel myself go into a trance
There's nothing more in this world than when I see
You saying I love you back to me
And their is nothing so sweet
As the joy I feel when I watch you sleep
If the world could see what I see
Then everyone would feel the same as me
And I can't explain why
Just looking at you gets me so high
Published 29th May 2021
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29th May 2021 9:10pm
Dear C,
Lucky is this person of whom you write. I admire it’s the ordinary things being done in this piece that give you pleasure. Lovely poem. H🌷
Lucky is this person of whom you write. I admire it’s the ordinary things being done in this piece that give you pleasure. Lovely poem. H🌷
30th May 2021 4:17am
