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summer
we came together in a summer haze
hot sun blazing down
love blazing out
you recieved more from me than just
l o v e
holding hands, skin so nervous
trembling
i gave you more than just
l o v e
even though we knew each other since time started
and we got married
you gave me more than just
l o v e
we gave each other a
c h i l d
hot sun blazing down
love blazing out
you recieved more from me than just
l o v e
holding hands, skin so nervous
trembling
i gave you more than just
l o v e
even though we knew each other since time started
and we got married
you gave me more than just
l o v e
we gave each other a
c h i l d
Published 20th Feb 2012
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wow!that was a great tribute of love to each other.
A smooth read.But the title and conclusion imtrigued me,they aren't analogous.[What welds them together]
A smooth read.But the title and conclusion imtrigued me,they aren't analogous.[What welds them together]
20th Feb 2012 12:29pm
our child was made in summer.
so it's a summer's child.
feeling the glow on your face from the summer sun after winter is how we feel about the news that my wife is pregnant
so it's a summer's child.
feeling the glow on your face from the summer sun after winter is how we feel about the news that my wife is pregnant
20th Feb 2012 6:40pm
