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Swimming Lessons
right from the start
we found ourselves in an ocean
of love
nearly drowning
because no one had taught us
how to swim
and such a vast body of water
filled our hearts
with fear
until we figured out
how to brave the
sweet waves
of you and me
we found ourselves in an ocean
of love
nearly drowning
because no one had taught us
how to swim
and such a vast body of water
filled our hearts
with fear
until we figured out
how to brave the
sweet waves
of you and me
Published 28th May 2021
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
28th May 2021 2:02am
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29th May 2021 5:42am
Dear D,
Fantastic metaphor for love and life really. Drowning. Feels like that sometimes. And without a manual on how to get through it one literally sinks or swims in order to get through. Your closing stanza is wonderful. Reflecting the strength of the human soul and desire to succeed and love. Great write. H🌷
Fantastic metaphor for love and life really. Drowning. Feels like that sometimes. And without a manual on how to get through it one literally sinks or swims in order to get through. Your closing stanza is wonderful. Reflecting the strength of the human soul and desire to succeed and love. Great write. H🌷
28th Aug 2021 4:13am
As always your comments and feedback never fail to touch my heart strings, dear H.
You know I love a good metaphor. ;)
You know I love a good metaphor. ;)
7th Jun 2021 5:35pm
Love does not come with a user manual, if it did, it would save so many people from drowning.
7th Jun 2021 5:36pm
Love does not come with a user manual, if it did, it would save so many people from drowning.
28th Aug 2021 4:14am
7th Jul 2021 2:42am
