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Songbirds
I have learned the call of all the songbirds
But lately, they sing all the wrong words.
I am waiting for a clue.
But lately, they sing all the wrong words.
I am waiting for a clue.
Published 27th May 2021
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27th May 2021 7:45pm
Nice and crisp this one ... I love hearing the birds in the morning when I take the dog for a run ...
27th May 2021 8:17pm
27th May 2021 8:19pm
I know it was metaphoric ... I have used it as a poetry prompt ... it is a great one ...
27th May 2021 8:28pm
Anonymous
27th May 2021 9:41pm
Wonderfully penned little piece here...it's metaphoric brevity leaves it's mark, dear poet....
It's sometimes the waiting is what makes or breaks ... then, to decipher that clue...... just my own humble take away....
Appreciate this thought provoker...
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
B
It's sometimes the waiting is what makes or breaks ... then, to decipher that clue...... just my own humble take away....
Appreciate this thought provoker...
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
B
