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ternion2
a fast-car medley
fast cars
bugatti chiron super sport,
no pavement made his speed to thwart;
nor corner’s desperate elbow-curves
can ricochet such steel-cut nerves.
hennessey venom f5-wings,
swift as the firebird’s wisdom sings.
no idle throb where, seamless, fly
rimmed rubbers to their destiny.
ssc tuatara miles:
fast cars, whose drivers flash broad smiles.
fast cars2
koenigsegg agera rs line:
such cozy comforts shall my soul confine
when, zipped between a notion and its rhyme,
i view the galaxy in cyber time!
hennessey venom gt, smokeless gun,
ambivalence that rivals yet the sun;
bugatti veyron super sport hi hum,
bewildering the gaze of all who come.
fast cars3
now my rimac concept two-two
zings like lightning from the pale blue,
fleetly kissing hasty adieu
through my aromatic cachou.
watch me from your red sombrero:
ssc ultimate aero;
then, on my returning arrow,
meet me at love’s straight and narrow—
sweet aston martin valkyrie,
engineered not for the dreary.
© Copyright 2021 May 24
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
fast cars
bugatti chiron super sport,
no pavement made his speed to thwart;
nor corner’s desperate elbow-curves
can ricochet such steel-cut nerves.
hennessey venom f5-wings,
swift as the firebird’s wisdom sings.
no idle throb where, seamless, fly
rimmed rubbers to their destiny.
ssc tuatara miles:
fast cars, whose drivers flash broad smiles.
fast cars2
koenigsegg agera rs line:
such cozy comforts shall my soul confine
when, zipped between a notion and its rhyme,
i view the galaxy in cyber time!
hennessey venom gt, smokeless gun,
ambivalence that rivals yet the sun;
bugatti veyron super sport hi hum,
bewildering the gaze of all who come.
fast cars3
now my rimac concept two-two
zings like lightning from the pale blue,
fleetly kissing hasty adieu
through my aromatic cachou.
watch me from your red sombrero:
ssc ultimate aero;
then, on my returning arrow,
meet me at love’s straight and narrow—
sweet aston martin valkyrie,
engineered not for the dreary.
© Copyright 2021 May 24
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
Published 26th May 2021
Author's Note
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Ternion
From Latin ternio, from terni (“three each”)
a company of three; a triad or set of three
Ternion
From Latin ternio, from terni (“three each”)
a company of three; a triad or set of three
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26th May 2021 5:44pm
These are great, Cab! The first is my favorite; you truly nailed that one! Love all that 's' consonance. The second you switch it up with 'n' consonance, and the third with 'u'! It does read like a melody all the way through!
30th May 2021 2:17am
Thanks, Ahavati; your quick analysis shows your attention to detail, whereby you have so easily sifted the unique characteristics of each member of the ternion.
Trust you to see the essential elements!
Always a pleasure to read your take on any issue.
Sincerely
cab
Trust you to see the essential elements!
Always a pleasure to read your take on any issue.
Sincerely
cab
