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Sidewalk Chalk
I scribbled our names
in sidewalk chalk on
the corner of your street-
purple-cursive enclosed in
a crooked yellow heart-imperfect
e n o u g h to make us giggle
but bright enough for all to see-
just-like-l o v e
I hope it doesn't rain.
in sidewalk chalk on
the corner of your street-
purple-cursive enclosed in
a crooked yellow heart-imperfect
e n o u g h to make us giggle
but bright enough for all to see-
just-like-l o v e
I hope it doesn't rain.
Published 20th Feb 2012
| Edited 22nd Feb 2012
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20th Feb 2012 3:02am
So much sincerity and impact in all its simplicity. I adore this. And especially like the last line :)
20th Feb 2012 3:04am
Meghan
:)This is beautiful.
As direct and unsparingly honest
as it can get. One cut one kill.
The last line made me smile a wry
smile.
:)
Write on,
Sumeet
p.s- In stead of 'bold', another
font probably could do.JMO.
:)This is beautiful.
As direct and unsparingly honest
as it can get. One cut one kill.
The last line made me smile a wry
smile.
:)
Write on,
Sumeet
p.s- In stead of 'bold', another
font probably could do.JMO.
21st Feb 2012 4:06am
Good advice. I didn't really like the bold myself. But I also don't find any of the other font choices fitting :/
Maybe just having it separated is enough? Or should I italicize? Help me decide! You're good at the visual side of writing!
Maybe just having it separated is enough? Or should I italicize? Help me decide! You're good at the visual side of writing!
20th Feb 2012 3:30am
20th Feb 2012 3:53am
20th Feb 2012 6:12am
now thats the best dam valentine present you can get....people dont appreciate the simple side of Love....its the best....
20th Feb 2012 12:41pm
Thank you so much for reading and commenting everyone! Much appreciated, as always <3
22nd Feb 2012 5:57am
21st Sep 2022 4:44am
That’s the real deal, childhood romance right there. Only need to certify it with an entry into her diary.
