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"I'm ready to die for You"
Writing challenge. Sentence submitted by My slave; "I'm ready to die for You"
My made-up story build around that sentence;
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She possessed dark soul.. Even though she was radiant. It wasn’t always visible to the outside world. He knew about it, had tasted it, been hurt by it more than once. Yet he didn’t choose any other path. Wanted no escape. For he wanted her. He wanted her, felt within every fiber of his desperate soul. He longed for all her colors, including those pitch black or hurtful. All her impossibilities, all her untruths, her madness, completely, all. Every touch of her soul, he wanted. She had become his obsession in these past years. Limitless love, even though loving her was rough. For she didn’t felt the same.
Yet she was his dream, his nightmare, his everything, the reason to get up in the morning, to enjoy life.
He knew, from the beginning, this was a battle he was going to lose. But that didn't stop him from feeling, from needing her. He loved her so deeply, deeply and unconditionally. He took everything she had to offer. Swallowed every word like sweet candy. She possessed his mind, hung new paintings there, pictures, memories for him to remember. Only those of value to her, throwing overboard which didn't matter. He became her mindless zombie. Unable to think for himself.
Within those dark parts of her soul, lay his unearthly attraction. He couldn't run from it, no more, did try but lost. She pulled him back from the edge. So whenever she called, he came. His life hers, he couldn’t deny her, or push her out. He was hers to control, as much as she wanted, her pupped on a string. And at some point she did control it all. He had no boundaries, hadn’t known any, with Her he was a blank, unwritten. Enjoyed everything as long as she did. He had lost so much because of her, his money, his job, his marriage. But she had given him everything, the reason to live. She kept getting stronger, at his expense. She knew that, so did he. But he didn't cared as long as she was with him. She drained him, he only gave, she took.. This was their type of relationship, others just didn’t understand. For the little she gave, was all he needed, even if it was almost nothing, it came from her, therefor enough for him, he had never been more happy
After pushing him through the most horrible things a human can bear, one day she spoke the following words, “I want you forever”. He was shocked at first, but immediately understood what she needed, he felt a sense of pride. She wanted him, not just now, forever! Her words, she touched the depths of his soul. She shared, wanted to feel, to know how infinity would feel. Eternity bound to her.
So, it became his goal. Whereupon he knelt before her one day, decided to give her where her desire lay. He was lost without her, without his purpose, maddening, he couldn't bear the thought of ever losing her. No one else had gone this far for her, he would be The one who could give her everything, all, even his life, the first. Offering his ultimate gift. "Goddess; I'm ready to die for You" ... He spoke lovingly .. To which She got up, looked at him. "I know". She grabbed his chin, looked deep into his eyes. "I'll never let you go" She stuck a knife into his side. He collapsed in her arms, bleeding his life into Hers a symbol of his love.
My made-up story build around that sentence;
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She possessed dark soul.. Even though she was radiant. It wasn’t always visible to the outside world. He knew about it, had tasted it, been hurt by it more than once. Yet he didn’t choose any other path. Wanted no escape. For he wanted her. He wanted her, felt within every fiber of his desperate soul. He longed for all her colors, including those pitch black or hurtful. All her impossibilities, all her untruths, her madness, completely, all. Every touch of her soul, he wanted. She had become his obsession in these past years. Limitless love, even though loving her was rough. For she didn’t felt the same.
Yet she was his dream, his nightmare, his everything, the reason to get up in the morning, to enjoy life.
He knew, from the beginning, this was a battle he was going to lose. But that didn't stop him from feeling, from needing her. He loved her so deeply, deeply and unconditionally. He took everything she had to offer. Swallowed every word like sweet candy. She possessed his mind, hung new paintings there, pictures, memories for him to remember. Only those of value to her, throwing overboard which didn't matter. He became her mindless zombie. Unable to think for himself.
Within those dark parts of her soul, lay his unearthly attraction. He couldn't run from it, no more, did try but lost. She pulled him back from the edge. So whenever she called, he came. His life hers, he couldn’t deny her, or push her out. He was hers to control, as much as she wanted, her pupped on a string. And at some point she did control it all. He had no boundaries, hadn’t known any, with Her he was a blank, unwritten. Enjoyed everything as long as she did. He had lost so much because of her, his money, his job, his marriage. But she had given him everything, the reason to live. She kept getting stronger, at his expense. She knew that, so did he. But he didn't cared as long as she was with him. She drained him, he only gave, she took.. This was their type of relationship, others just didn’t understand. For the little she gave, was all he needed, even if it was almost nothing, it came from her, therefor enough for him, he had never been more happy
After pushing him through the most horrible things a human can bear, one day she spoke the following words, “I want you forever”. He was shocked at first, but immediately understood what she needed, he felt a sense of pride. She wanted him, not just now, forever! Her words, she touched the depths of his soul. She shared, wanted to feel, to know how infinity would feel. Eternity bound to her.
So, it became his goal. Whereupon he knelt before her one day, decided to give her where her desire lay. He was lost without her, without his purpose, maddening, he couldn't bear the thought of ever losing her. No one else had gone this far for her, he would be The one who could give her everything, all, even his life, the first. Offering his ultimate gift. "Goddess; I'm ready to die for You" ... He spoke lovingly .. To which She got up, looked at him. "I know". She grabbed his chin, looked deep into his eyes. "I'll never let you go" She stuck a knife into his side. He collapsed in her arms, bleeding his life into Hers a symbol of his love.
Published 26th May 2021
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