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Senryu: Ageless Perplexity
What is real, true love?
Does it burst in or sneak up?
By rules ungoverned
Does it burst in or sneak up?
By rules ungoverned
Published 24th May 2021
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24th May 2021 9:55pm
25th May 2021 00:28am
It's all those darn midichlorians.
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(Sorry, my brain was stuck in a galaxy far, far away...)
I like this. Good questions....
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(Sorry, my brain was stuck in a galaxy far, far away...)
I like this. Good questions....
26th May 2021 8:35am
30th May 2021 00:37am
Ah, to answer those questions GW... I want to say bursts but the rules are ungoverned so it's a moving target.
30th May 2021 10:13pm
9th Jun 2021 6:26am
Dear GW,
I say neither. I think true love will pinch you right on the arse. It hurts like mad and you can’t sit down for days. I do love the conundrum of this lovely write. It really is so very thoughtful and sweet. H🌷
I say neither. I think true love will pinch you right on the arse. It hurts like mad and you can’t sit down for days. I do love the conundrum of this lovely write. It really is so very thoughtful and sweet. H🌷
13th Jun 2021 7:46am
This exercise in brevity makes me think of Plato and Aristotle. By reducing things to the simplest forms we open up the possibilities of more complexities.
