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Sleeping Pretty
You're sleeping finally
You had a bad night
I'm always awake watching you
Usually at dawn you flash a gentle smile
Then I know not to disturb you
I'm always up early
Sleeping is a chore as you age
I'll catch a nap later
20 minutes
No dreams
Recharge
You had a bad night
I'm always awake watching you
Usually at dawn you flash a gentle smile
Then I know not to disturb you
I'm always up early
Sleeping is a chore as you age
I'll catch a nap later
20 minutes
No dreams
Recharge
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Re. Sleeping Pretty
23rd May 2021 6:20pm
It can indeed, Poet. Then there's graceful acceptance.
Big Like on snapshots into your life.
Big Like on snapshots into your life.
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Re: Re. Sleeping Pretty
23rd May 2021 6:45pm
Going with the flow and what I know ....
Most of the time I laugh at myself
Thx A
Most of the time I laugh at myself
Thx A
Re. Sleeping Pretty
23rd May 2021 6:26pm
Re: Re. Sleeping Pretty
23rd May 2021 6:46pm
yeah, decided to switch gears and write about nicer things for a spell
Whips and chains after dark .....
Thz S
Whips and chains after dark .....
Thz S
Re. Sleeping Pretty
23rd May 2021 7:04pm
WELL THEN I WILL C U AFTER DARK THEN. GREAT NAME FOR A CHATROOM OR A GROUP. JUST SAYING!
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23rd May 2021 7:12pm
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23rd May 2021 7:17pm
Re. Sleeping Pretty
23rd May 2021 7:26pm
Re: Re. Sleeping Pretty
23rd May 2021 7:30pm
Back to my roots for a little while
A gentle approach....
It doesn't last but fun while it does
BIG APPRECIATION
thx L
A gentle approach....
It doesn't last but fun while it does
BIG APPRECIATION
thx L
Re. Sleeping Pretty
23rd May 2021 7:48pm
Dear PS,
Sleeping is a chore. I’m usually desperate for it but cat naps suffice. Aging is a peculiar process no joke! I BIG LIKE the gentleness of this poem. The thoughtful admiration is very sentimental. H🌷
Sleeping is a chore. I’m usually desperate for it but cat naps suffice. Aging is a peculiar process no joke! I BIG LIKE the gentleness of this poem. The thoughtful admiration is very sentimental. H🌷
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Re: Re. Sleeping Pretty
23rd May 2021 8:08pm
Dear H
Yes, never thought it would be so hard
Even on the weekends I'm up at dawn
Naps save me, love them
Appreciate the nod on my gentler side, tweaked my approach and it's been better ....
Thx H
An Honoria comment is high praise-- BIG LIKE
Yes, never thought it would be so hard
Even on the weekends I'm up at dawn
Naps save me, love them
Appreciate the nod on my gentler side, tweaked my approach and it's been better ....
Thx H
An Honoria comment is high praise-- BIG LIKE
Re. Sleeping Pretty
24th May 2021 6:34am
I think you realize if you do fall asleep, all that will come to you in your dreams is Trae Youngs buzzer beater.
Sorry for the reminder, heck of a game.
Sorry for the reminder, heck of a game.
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Re: Re. Sleeping Pretty
24th May 2021 12:54pm
That guy is unstoppable
It was a great game with a sorry ending but only game one. Problem is Trae will bei n game 2 also. He reminds me of a street fighter ..
It was a great game with a sorry ending but only game one. Problem is Trae will bei n game 2 also. He reminds me of a street fighter ..
Re. Sleeping Pretty
24th May 2021 11:38am
Ah, I love when your sweet kindness shines.... this is lovely.
Big Like your big heart
Checkmarks ✔
Heart ❤
Big Like your big heart
Checkmarks ✔
Heart ❤
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10th Jul 2021 3:35am
Re. Sleeping Pretty
10th Jul 2021 8:47am