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RETROSPECTIVELY REFLECTIVE PERSPECTIVE OF MY LIFE IN ONE MOMENT'S BRIEF REPRISE (5-19-2021, Palm Springs, CA)

   
twenty eight      
and wider still      
lifes brimming cup      
not nearly      
filled      
just as it      
still feels    
here now    
in this fleeting    
moments    
sudden flashbacks    
fluid passing      
despite all      
and everything else      
both good      
and bad      
thats come      
and gone      
oer the years      
ever since      
to either      
further deplete      
or fill it      
unexpectedly realized  
here    
just now      
thirty nine years      
later      
at sixty seven      
in this      
fleeting moments      
sudden      
retrospective      
comparative      
reflective perspective      
from my      
personal      
inner measurements      
self assessments      
new  relative      
insight      
so effortlessly      
mined      
and      
gleaned    
to    
self reflectively    
better assess    
this spontaneous    
snap shot    
of just where    
i sense    
feel    
and know    
this so called    
me    
i think    
and believe    
to at least    
some degree    
i    
and my    
conscious awareness    
presently    
here
still am  
in the    
tuned in
temporal flow    
of this
greater  
fleeting    
illusory moments    
never ending    
continuous    
now    
     
     
     
     
       
       
       
       
       
 
Written by OyateInyanNajin
Published | Edited 26th Mar 2022
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