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Summer at the Coffee Shop
Summer at the Coffee Shop
Honey hair haloed in flaxen sheen
Her gems gleam with a glint of soul transfusion
Aglow with occult secrets
Of starry-eyed pentagrams
And feed into my hungry Chakra galaxy
The naked splendor of her midriff
Whose node her navel breathes
Where her planetary plexus
Is a belly dancer's bread and butter
Honey hair haloed in flaxen sheen
Her gems gleam with a glint of soul transfusion
Aglow with occult secrets
Of starry-eyed pentagrams
And feed into my hungry Chakra galaxy
The naked splendor of her midriff
Whose node her navel breathes
Where her planetary plexus
Is a belly dancer's bread and butter
Published 21st May 2021
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21st May 2021 5:00am
"Aglow with occult secrets" pulled me in asap and the imagery was an awesome bombardment to the senses... soo vivid and rich... I loved the fun feel with the tad of sexy... and ending with a killer line...
"Is a belly dancer's bread and butter".... brilliant!
Fantastically penned ink, John
🌹-S
"Is a belly dancer's bread and butter".... brilliant!
Fantastically penned ink, John
🌹-S
21st May 2021 5:04am
Oh, my friend, it tickles me pink that the imagery here brought you such joy. Indeed I made it to the coffee shop for maybe twenty minutes today. But this woman with her midriff bare immediately made me think of a belly dancer. So this is what came up. I thank you from my naked man's heart for the read and the RL. You have made me a very happy boy. ;)
Xo
John
Xo
John
26th May 2021 8:15pm
Another wonderful visit to the coffee shop with you John. Love all the elements in this one especially occult secrets... pentagrams, chakras, belly dancer's... definitely some great imagery. A lovely mixture of coffee, magic, and women. ;)
26th May 2021 9:12pm
And I thank you for the RL both for myself and my barista girl whose beauty you honor.
26th May 2021 9:10pm
Love that my barista girls please you, Kristina. Pleasing you with my poems and the women they embody makes me very happy as a man. I thank you with my utmost gratitude.
Xo
John
Xo
John
