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"Trial and Error" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 23/10/2016

Yup ... Trial And Error ...
Is A Great CORRECTOR ... !!!

I've Had My Trials ...
... Within This Life ..

But Have Found They've Helped ...
When My Temperature's SWELLED ... !!!!!

Somehow They've Dealt ...
Some Cards That Felt ...

As If NO BLUFF ...
Could of Been Enough ...
To Rise ABOVE ...
When Things Got TOUGH ... !!!

From Working With Jerks ...
Who I Wanted To Hurt ...

To Dealing With My Mum ...
When Sclerosis STUNNED ...
... MULTIPLE Functions ....
of Her Nervous System ... !!!!!

Ya See Trials Have Been ...
A Thing That Seemed ...

INSURMOUNTABLE ...
...... BELIEVE ...... !!!!!


But Have Also Built ...
A Strength That My Mother ...
... Gave To Me ... !!!

When She Walked ...
And Fought For Me ... !!!

Even With .....
Her Husband Ya' SEE ... !!!

There Were Some ERRORS ...
That Lead To ... TERROR ...

That HURT Her Heart And Soul DEEPLY ... !!!
But Also Proved How STRONG She'd Been ... !!!


She'll Always Be ...
My TRUE Black Queen ... !!!


Because of Her STRENGTH ...
When She Came To RESENT ...

The Man She'd SPENT ...........
Her Love .... Upon ...

A Strength SO STRONG ...
That Our Love Then SHONE ... !!!


But Now She's Gone ...
Her Spirit Prolongs ...
And Helps Me Through ...
My Life's ISSUES ... !!!

Because of ERRORS ...
That I Now Make ...

But Now Whenever ...
I'm Feeling PRESSURED ...
I Remember How ...
We Worked TOGETHER ... !!!

As Her Life Was Slowly Drowned ... !!!
And Know That She'll NEVER Let Me Down ... !!!!!

If ERRORS I Make ...
Make Her Feel ASHAMED ... !!!

Because of The LOVE ...
We STILL Share TODAY ... !!!


So Many Trials Are Part of Life ...
I've Found Denial ...
DOESN'T Help You Slide by ...
Those DIFFICULT Times ... !!!

Because Trials I've Faced ...
Have Made My Game ......
Flow ... TIGHT And STRAIGHT ... !!!

From Girls In My World ...
To Places I've Worked ...

I've REFUSED To Be Jerked ...
Or Let Chickens ... DISTURB ...

The Vibe That I ...
Have Lived To FIND ...

DISMISSES Trials .....................
And ...... HARDER Times ........... !!!

From EVER Becoming ...
A Part of Something ...
I'm ... PARTY TO ... !!!

See Trials Have PROVED ...
That Who You CHOOSE ...
To Be Down With Your Moves ...

Is Key To KEEPING Your Vibe COOL ... !!!

Instead of Making Moves With Crews ...
Whose Interests Do NOT INCLUDE YOU ... !!!

THINK It Through ... !!!
Trials You've Been Through ...
And ERRORS ... PROVE ...
That We Must Take Note ...
of ... Our Life's Quotes ...

Because Our DUD Notes ...
Are Things That ... SHOW ...

A BETTER WAY For Us To Go ... !!!

Because As I Said ...
At The Beginning of ...
This INSPIRED Poem .... !!!!!

One of Life's GREATEST Correctors ...
When You Think About It ... IS ...

...... Trial And Error ......
Written by BigVirge (Big Virge)
Published
Author's Note
Indeed, there have been many trials and errors in my life, which inspired this write ......
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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