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Tell Me Sweet Little Lies
The beginning of the algorithm
the first inputs of algorithm
The twirling signs
in the spiraling bodies
of the celestial firmament
The creature
that can capture
your mind
and imagination
your heart
and fascination
the art
of supreme seduction
She has a mind like mine
She has opened my eyes
I came upon the masterpiece
and was stunned by the beauty
wanting to gaze for eternity
Your stars and cosmic dust
exist in my mind also
mind of my mind
we are made of the same stars
you take me back to a time of purity
except maybe you are more pure
Published 14th May 2021
Author's Note
Not really shore what to say... It is probably too much like high strangeness.
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14th May 2021 8:25am
16th May 2021 11:36pm
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16th May 2021 11:38pm
14th May 2021 10:31am
I like the layers in this and your words choices and the images they present to the reader, very much enjoyed. R
16th May 2021 11:39pm
Anonymous
14th May 2021 1:20pm
This left me thinking of stardust and how we ARE essentially all made of a bit... I too, wrote something saying the same... so that notion really hits home for me...
I was lost within this piece and reveled in it....
Ty for sharing
🌹
-B
I was lost within this piece and reveled in it....
Ty for sharing
🌹
-B
16th May 2021 11:41pm
Totally cool! Please send me a link to this work you cite, or I will search for it amongst your works. Thank you for your invaluable perspective!
Anonymous
17th May 2021 00:06am
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/416544-a-window-through-an-urban-thicket/
You're welcome and no worries about comments or anything.... I was just struck by your choice of words in this piece.... which reminded me of where my mind was writing the above!
🌹 - 💙
You're welcome and no worries about comments or anything.... I was just struck by your choice of words in this piece.... which reminded me of where my mind was writing the above!
🌹 - 💙
14th May 2021 1:37pm
It reads like a journal of recognition; except, as is typically the case being human, we tend to place that which we admire above our own natural being, in this case, purity. Which is really synchronicitous for me because Purity was the Moonology card I drew today. I love receiving affirmations from the Universe ( not implying this poem is to or about me in any way - just noting today's universal pattern through poetry ).
Well done.
Well done.
16th May 2021 11:47pm
Your perspective is grand! Thank you for sharing it with me! I am certainly a believer in an interactive universe, synchronicity, the strangers and sign posts, affirmations... Oh... Affirmations... They are just the best. So very glad I was a participant in your magical universe...
Also, I would say that, on some level, the piece was written in a state of both retro-causality and universal interconnectedness, specifically for you. (Along with an infinity of other threads and filaments of light).
Also, I would say that, on some level, the piece was written in a state of both retro-causality and universal interconnectedness, specifically for you. (Along with an infinity of other threads and filaments of light).
14th May 2021 3:49pm
16th May 2021 11:47pm
