Senryu - First Sensual Stirring

That's awesome.  On your mind when you woke up or just first poetic thoughts?

Thank you, LJ. I am glad you like the piece. Yes, it was my you first thought while walking so I wrote it down.

Wicked!  Love it.

Once wrote a poem in my dream or was trying to, a tanka.. I was honestly doing syllable counts in my dream.  Woke up finger counting and couldn't remember the words.  It was so cool and sad at the same time because I couldn't remember.

Now that's the sign of a true poet...sucks you couldn't remember the words. Maybe they'll come back as a deja vu.

Such visceral imagery, BB ... I wonder how the whole dream played out..... Hmmmm.... I know that I will sometimes incorporate the tail end portion of what I was dreaming into my first thoughts upon waking.... Soooo, perhaps these thoughts were from a bigger narrative?? Ohh the pondering!! I loved the last line especially, 'Aphrodite's perch' ...... sexy and steamy.... Yeowza!.... lol 😂  
Purrrrr!
Thank you for sharing your first thoughts of the day. I thoroughly enjoyed reading.  
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Mmmmm...I can't wait to read the end of that dream...Maybe mine was the beginning. I am so glad that you like this piece and especially that last line. Dreams at dawn are splendid🌹🌹🐻💞🐰I can feel that purr🐻💞🐰

You had me at sweet nymph ... why do you think I take all those long walks in the woods ... nicely poeted GW ...

Why to consort with your nymph sistren of course 🧚‍♀️🌹🙏